Webnovel Author: patrick_john_yu

i agree to your review cause i am really bad at writing and i am not a literature and I don't know what to write about others cause i write what is in my imagination and sorry for the grammar i did not really my forte i got an average grade in school but i forgotten the lesson very easily

Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique

Fantasy · patrick_john_yu

patrick_john_yu

2yr

Replied to AvoidanceLife88

thank you for reminding me

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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique

Fantasy · patrick_john_yu

patrick_john_yu

2yr

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sorry I just realize my blunder of using him not her

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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique

Fantasy · patrick_john_yu

patrick_john_yu

2yr

Replied to AvoidanceLife88

ok I try thank you for your opinion

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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique

Fantasy · patrick_john_yu

patrick_john_yu

2yr

Replied to AvoidanceLife88

I modify some parts and thank you for giving me a word count on the second chapter

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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique

Fantasy · patrick_john_yu

patrick_john_yu

2yr

Replied to AvoidanceLife88

thank you

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Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique

Fantasy · patrick_john_yu

patrick_john_yu

2yr

Posted

this is my first novel and definitely not a novelist. I'm only creating this for my fun and sorry for my grammar because I am only a reader not a writer. English or any thing that require me to write something is not my strength.

Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique

Fantasy · patrick_john_yu

patrick_john_yu

2yr

Commented

😂😂😂😂😂

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Rest in Peaces

Eastern · nanchengnv

patrick_john_yu

2yr

Commented

erasing memories without concent and brainwashing can you call yourself friends after that.

ch 0 4 "Friends"

Remilitarization.

Others · Sprlte

patrick_john_yu

2yr

Commented

there are misssing space right here and the other chapters its confusing so can you fix it author

Yao Si felt that there was something wrong with her recently. She used to sleep like a brick, so even roaring thunder couldn't affect her slumber. But oddly enough, she couldn't seem to fall asleep for the last couple days, and what was even more strange was that she felt energetic and in good spirits despite the sleepless nights.