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why are we not focusing on the mc perspective instead of his son it’s really confusing knowin more about tha son then the mc

Im tryba find the logic in him being thwin son that makes zero since tywin would never cheat idc wat anybody say he would never cheat on his wife so wat logic is it for the mc to be tywin son if u wanted him to be tywin son and king make separate the lannister house from everyone else and build his own kingdom or start a rebellion dont jus unrealistic stuff like that

Bruh I’m sorry but I can’t stand the mc I just don’t like his personality it’s like he shows to much emotions for me I like mc who keep a cool head and a pokerface all the time he seem like on of them mc who be a beta simp and blush when a girl flirt with him

Come on author please don’t start with the he hiding his true strength from everybody like that make the story boring why would you hiding your strength? Is he scared when people find out how strong he is they gon come after him if he is he just need to man up and get stronger so you can do whatever he want theres no reason to hide his strength🤨

Can you please make him look different like he could look like cumber

Did u drop this

I feel for a Viking and a king he should have more than one wife at least four or five they should be dacey,sansa,dany,margaery,Melisande

Dude u ova here threaten us to get yo story to rank 20 and shi like nobody gonna read yo shi if u keep doin shi like this posting everything on yo patron like every book u wrote always go on yo patron u might as well just stop writing on here and jus write on yo patron

When the next chapter

Can you make so he come from a farmer family from tan san village and his parents end up dying so he was raised by his grandpa until he turned 6 and after he test his souls spirt he declines the offer to join tha sprit hall and please don’t make him follow tan San let him have his own journey actually make them Enemy’s and let him still all the beautiful girls

Dude dude bro His sister better not get raped I swear if dude sister get raped your a cold hearted person I swear on my life u don’t need his sister to get raped just for the mc personality u already did it to his mother who is still gettin tortured jus let them go bro theses are little kids come on now

Come on now fam don’t let his mother and sister get raped in front of him jus kill them u taking it to far with this one let them monsters at the beginning come and kill them all before them knight get the chance to do anything

Bruh why does he have to be such a beta weak mc he is like another kazuma but less dumb and more scared of stuff and author u could of at least made the mc stronger than that it’ s sad the only skill he got is a summoning skill 🤦🏾

Jus make him less of crybaby and more calm and calcula ting

This story is lowkey trash the mc is a crybaby who whines about everything and I bet your going to ruin your own story even more by making him a dog to his grandfather Or the clan and he going to let his father do wateva he want to him 🤦🏾

Wen is the next chapter this is great