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Evil can’t overcome good. Someone should have told that old man.

Being an elder does not mean you are always right. The young can be quite cunning and resourceful. Proof in point. Ye Yuan

I agree that this novel should be one of the picked (selected ones). Not the smutty ones.

This book is addictive.

This is my honest comment. Like so many others have stated constructively. Please tell us the story without the cigarette smoking. You appear to be a good writer. Your writing is not loaded with graphic language and action. But, you need to get to the point. Too much emphasis on smoking.

The evil mot should be punished too. putting them out of business is too easy. The father is no less guilty for spoiling his daughter and being unaware of her evil dee ds

I just think something is fishy with the Lu mother. She got depression and went to live abroad but all her other children are at home. Songman may be a daughter separated at birth?

I absolutely do not like these very short chapters. Please put in a bit more work.

Agreed!

Are these not her twin babies that they lied and told her were dead?

It is a good thing the younger sister is not jealous

ℳℴ 𝒥𝒾𝓃𝓍𝒾 𝒾𝓈 𝒶 𝓋ℯ𝓇𝓎 𝓀𝒾𝓃𝒹 𝒸𝒽𝒾𝓁

This book had many plots in the lives of the parents and it ended abruptly Then it came to the life of their son and his love story that ended without a concludion. Note to the author: Every story has an ending. Why is this book ended without a conclusion to the story of. The young people? I have noticed this style in your writing styles. Leaves an impressio the writer’s imagination dried up.

Chen Nian is a goo frien but does she need to be pushing men at her friend? It is as if she thinks her friend is mindless end want to bed hop. 😚

Why is it I fee this story is going in another direction? Is the writer now pairing Gong Ji with Hwa Jin? Hmmm!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola