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bad dog!

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William watched as the three of them walked away and a knowing smile slowly appeared on his face as though he had something planned. Hearing what Katherine said to Lexi earlier, it made him like her more. She was such a headstrong person and he hadn't met a lot of women like her. She was such a treasure. And he wanted to get his hands on her.

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Urban · NixxxiE

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I'm gonna laugh my butt off if it's a freakin wedding dress!

"Ah… Yes. It's a little heavier than I expected but I can manage… I think…" Katherine replied.

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Urban · NixxxiE

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O.O finally

"For Christ's sake, Falcon! Why are you doing yoga in the dark?!" he spat as he limped his way towards a figure at the corner of the room.

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Urban · NixxxiE

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I wanna pop him in the nose with a rolled up newspaper & say "no! bad dog!"

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"Hmmm… You look beautiful in that dress, Ms. Miller." He had a cocky smile on his face as he studied her figure. He was proud that he learned about her name. When Katherine did not respond, he added, "I hope you don't mind me asking but I am actually also looking for a new secretary. Are you perhaps looking for a better opportunity? Park Group takes 'great care' of their people." 

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Urban · NixxxiE

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ooops! but heck ya.. by now your bodies are kinda on auto

As soon as he got inside the elevator, his head snapped towards the side and brought a hand over his face. "Sh*t."

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Urban · NixxxiE

theOnlyLA
Commented

it's William!!

Even without turning his head, Damien knew whose voice it belonged to. "William," he muttered and sipped his wine.

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress

Urban · NixxxiE

theOnlyLA
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at this day & age it's a lost cause experiment but heart transplant..

"Well then… we will try more. We will try harder." She said standing up. 

Touch of Flame

Touch of Flame

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

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😉 oh I know

He could learn some gentlemanly conduct, she thought to herself. 

Touch of Flame

Touch of Flame

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

theOnlyLA
Commented

oh poor Daisy 😁

The room fell silent, and Daisy's heart stopped beating.

Midnight Surrender

Midnight Surrender

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

theOnlyLA
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note to yourself? 😉

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Midnight Surrender

Midnight Surrender

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

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I usually don't write reviews until after I've completed a book, but I am doing this anyway. I first wanted to review at the end of the last free chapter but even at the halfway mark, which is where I am now, my comments are about the same. Negatives.. This story is overly wordy & straight up repetitive. For the plot to have only come so far at this point & yet take up so many chapter is well a drag. The pace is too slow, & it's not even a slow-burn romance. It also doesn't feel real. I'm not saying a situation like this couldn't happen; I'm saying the writing isn't drawing me in. It's brimming full of emotional phrases, but every character is one-sided, & when they try to be complex they contradict themselves, especially the FL. The single chapters don't always flow as cohesive story. Their relationship is founded on toxic gaslighting & abuse. When the author skips throught half the year there's so much "dreaming" I wasn't sure that's what was happening. Overall there's just too much mush & unnecessary violence. Positives.. The world sounds beautiful. perhaps this is simply not my writing style.

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theOnlyLA
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🥰🥰🥰

ch 0 4 | Spirit of a Teacher, Sword of a General (Part II)

Heart of Flowers Sword of Thorns

Heart of Flowers Sword of Thorns

History · author_aruel

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😱

ch 0 3 | Spirit of a Teacher, Sword of a General (Part I)

Heart of Flowers Sword of Thorns

Heart of Flowers Sword of Thorns

History · author_aruel

theOnlyLA
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theOnlyLA
theOnlyLA
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Mhmm... A massage is never just a massage 😉

Malachi allowed his fingers to glide up to her neck and rub away the tension there. She relaxed a little. 

Touch of Flame

Touch of Flame

Fantasy · JasmineJosef

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