I kinda like your previous creation but this is definitely more thrilling. Maybe because this is just a new, starting novel? But you have done well in making this plot.
Fantasy · MikeWright
Oh my god! I love it! For my first novel to be ever read, i love it so much! Although the chapters are still not much, its already good! I want More chapters!!
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I kinda like your previous creation but this is definitely more thrilling. Maybe because this is just a new, starting novel? But you have done well in making this plot.
The Chronicles of Jadestone
Fantasy · MikeWright