Thanks for the update really good chapter hopefully next one soon
Clearly you didn’t read it because he does get a dragon, if you like powerfantasys ok this isn’t one of them. The story is really good and is close enough to how an actual story in that universe would be.
Author clearly knows nothing about Naruto, if you want an edgy story with no real depth and accurate lore representation then this is your story but if you want an actual Naruto fanfic then skip it. Sure mc is evil but he’s also very stupid and morally makes zero sense, firstly Itachi couldn’t have killed mcs younger brother as after killing Izumi family photo saw Itachi nearly break and offered to kill the woman and children so it wasn’t Itachi who killed them. Secondly Itachi was just a child and so was sasuke so the mc who has knowledge of two lives thus should be a bit mature and not act like a child and immediately kill Itachis brother. If you wanted the mc to be against Itachi you could’ve done it if he didn’t have memories of naruto but now that he does it makes no sense as he would’ve understood that killing the uchiha was the only choice Itachi had, add that to the fact that there would’ve been no way the mc would’ve been spared if he was in the clan compounds.
She seems better than yuna but still not good, I mean telling a victim of abuse right after they’ve just begun to end things with the abuser that the only reason you helped them is because you like them is very manipulative
Do you write in standard or dialect
A small not before we start. Like i always say i write my novel in Arabic then Translate it using chatgpt so you may read some weird stuff that you can ignore if you like and enjoy the story. And... See you later kids
DC: THE RAVEN OF HOPE
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Thanks for the chapter rlly good story
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This is so good btw I hope rio doesn’t forgive them
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Honestly very interesting has a lot of potential but I hope it doesn’t get boring and falls into the classic novel trope
Really good hope for more chapters. The story is really interesting as the mc needs to find his way into actually getting stronger and somehow surviving
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original The Saint is a demon king
There exists five specific souls who have a unique ability that allows them to have a second chance at life after death, they are known as mystics. Each mystic has their own unique ability that gives them another chance at life. The demon king Vindicta has suffered many atrocities during his life especially towards the end and as he died the Demon race could no longer sustain itself and would go extinct. However he is given another chance of life as a saint however he still harbours hate for all the other species and has goals he needs to acomplish. How willl he accomplish his goals with other mystics lurking around with knowledge unique to them and how would he kill them. Warning: This will have implications to rape ( not from the main character) Author note: The protagonist is a villain but he has his own goals and motivation and so not every chapter will have him doing some horrendous stuff8 Chs 8 Collections
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Son of Muzan
What would happen if Muzan had a son before becoming the demon he was? Well Roku was born from Muzan and a women Muzan slept woh before he became a demon. Once he is born Muzan adopts him and chooses to turn him into a demon once he reaches he age of 18. Roku is the strongest demon aside from Muzan but he hopes to become stronger than his father. This is the legend of upper moon zero the son of Muzan.6 Chs 113 Collections
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My race will rule the world ( rewritten)
First novel don’t judge Guy gets reborn as a god and creates his own race I want my race to have long elf like ears and beautiful golden wings I also want them to have the affinity for light and sun magic. They will be the strongest race and wil make other races cower at their feet Author note: won’t post on Thursday Friday and Saturday47 Chs 119 Collections
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Birth of a demon
Emotions are a tricky thing, they express what one feels and control the destiny of all people no matter their strength. Anger that is all I felt when being born that was all the emotions I was given and it is all I am. I who was birthed in this world that is ruled by anger was made to destroy it and rule all worlds.6 Chs 7 Collections
Thks for the chapter
Black Sun: fairy tail fanfiction
Anime & Comics · ibry_7125