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ch 10 Chapter 10 Algar
Fantasy · rafa101
Good chapter
ch 0 9 Chapter 9 Algar
You have decent grammar so that’s why you got a 4. You have good updating stability to that’s a 4. You have a ok story development, I would wish if you did more research on bears and animals that you use also more action besides him talking about breeding his army all day. I love the character design it’s great but you could give more detailed information on how they look. Lastly we don’t know much about the world at all. I hope you get more into the world soon.
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ch 0 6 Chapter 6
Is it possible for a Eagle or maybe a serpent
ch 0 5 Chapter 5
Great job...
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Great chapter
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Having very fun writing this. The more support I get the better I feel to push out more chapters! Please leave a review so I can make the chapters better!
Sci-fi · Ant_3755
Please leave a review if you have read this series it means a lot to me. Even if it’s a not good review just let me know how the story is. Thank you!
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ch 10 Chapter 10 Algar
The last Daimon of Primus Planan
Fantasy · rafa101