You making puns on wife's name?
There must have been a spy in our midst because the next day after the announcement the kingdom was under siege and my lovely wife, your mother Sakana was killed. After she died I almost lost my will to fight. If it weren't for you I would have.
Games · Momocatt
The author basically made his own version of AoE with some sandboxing and the story is chockful of 'System Announcements'. I would have loved to see more interaction between Lords. I also think that for this kind of a resource gathering and military multiplying setting, the progress is far too slow in the first twenty chapters. I was happy when they introduced the first alien species, but it seems that will become a staple. It also seems that on this map exist people who are originally from this world, and are not from the Summoning Gate, so good job for Zhou Zhou there, he got a great Architect. Concept seems more like a log of happenings rather than a story, so I would wish for more narration, and also, please decide on the gender of Bai Yun.
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It's so cool to know that you know the story better than Maomi~ Why don't you use that foresight somewhere else, eh?
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and that's how you become a lottery addict....
If I see another "Thank you," I might not dare to draw ever again in my life.
Eastern · Xin Feng
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Urban · Origin
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ch 25 Utterly Scrunched Up
Urban · Origin
Okay, so what did I expect from the person who wrote Haven Online? I expected a good VRMMO style novel with engaging characters and a main character that died a gruesome death lololol! I was right, but omg, this was so freaking engaging! I was so in it that I read it all in just an hour and now I have to write for fricking updates, and that just ain't fair! I even did the Persona test, and I got the Ore fella (yummy, you know author ;) ) Seriously, you made it so angsty at the beginning, but I can't wait to see the revenge plot, I want it bad! Writing quality is superb, descriptions on point and no awkward placements, I laughed with the witty lines! Story development is solid like a rock, bae! Character design is flawless, all characters feel 3D, but I would love more interaction between Zeyu and Lixin, best bros! World BG is still unexplored, but you've revealed just enough for me to feel intrigued! The pods, the language chip, I wanna know more! Author-sama, please! Mwah mwah mwah!
I Became an SSS-Ranked Chef in a VR Game
Games · Momocatt