uzaldan

2yr

Posted

The switching of perspectives written from first person for Alk and Lake creates a feeling a dissonance in the writing and detracts from the immersion. I find myself consistently wanting to skip all of Alk's chapter's because it feels a less interesting story that is delaying the development of the plot. Sure Alk's part seems to be world building and introducing new characters but he feels hollow as a character and not much is known about his intentions. I can't feel any excitement for it because I'm imagining a cardboard cutout of a goblin that can't think for himself. Did not feel like it would be the kind of novel to use switching perspectives and doesn't seem to benefit from it. I really enjoyed the earlier chapters before Alk's inclusion but I do not feel excited for the after 60ish chapters seeing the frequent swapping of perspectives.

The Goblin's Feast

Fantasy · kuhaku_sora

uzaldan

3yr

Commented

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