Okay, but that's what I said, if it's not time to reveal it, that's okay, but why keep putting information before the time but erased, if it's not time yet and just don't talk about it. Putting @&*#%@#$% cuts all the immersion of the story, and better not to put anything, if it's not time and just don't talk about it putting @&*#%@#$%
ch 645 Return(End)
Fantasy · pinaka_
an example the third most powerful race he finds in the heritage of one of the 10 emperors. That led me to make this comment, but you've already done this several times, you keep erasing the text, to hide something that the MC is seeing or saying that doesn't make sense, we are following what the mc sees, this is not a mystery, this and just doing something silly that interferes with the reading experience because every time some text of something you see or say is hidden from the reader only. Mystery is something the mc doesn't know, just like his past, that's good. but hiding text from something he is seeing, talking, interacting with, doesn't make sense. Reading a book is like watching a movie, and as if you were the character but in the third person, what's the point of hiding it from the reader, it only ruins the experience because every time there's a scribbled text, erased hiding something that wasn't even supposed to be hidden.
ch 645 Return(End)
Fantasy · pinaka_
i think mc is the reincarnation of god or ninam is son of god and mc is the reincarnation of ninam
ch 280 The Righteous Knight vs Voss (Part-2)
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
if the pond contains a drop of the blood of a true being, was it not more to his advantage to absorb that blood to refine his body above lord rank?
ch 279 The Righteous Knight vs Voss (Part-1)
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
a little discouraging this shadow, what's the use of having a shadow that takes half of your strength, it doesn't make sense to take it from your body to do missions for him, since he'll get weaker. The option to revive is also useless, if he dies with the shadow on his body when he comes back to life the enemy will kill the shadow. the ideal was to not power the shadow and keep it in a hiding place as a backup life, but without losing the magic. I see this ability as a nerf. and the shadow is extremely weak if it dies out of body it can still lose its mythic magic.
ch 215 Singing the First Song!
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
I have read another book by the author, very good. This one is quite nice. however this separation of levels is confusing. the mc is on the 13th level of the first realm, something not seen in 700 years. but a level 15 monster appears. I understand that this monster would be level 5 of the 2nd realm. but it is not clear and makes it confusing. I understand that monster only has level and not realm of cultivation. but there has to be a separation like humans. The amount of hp of the monster is also very exaggerated, mc only has 10hp, but the monster has 500hp, even if it is lvl5 from a higher realm, and a very big difference. the mc's stats were supposed to be superior to the enemies by being mastered to the maximum because of the system, but the wolves had super high stats too.
ch 42 Darklin, The Gremlin!
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
please come back, it was an amazing novel
ch 279 The Righteous Knight vs Voss (Part-1)
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
@Crimson_ink Awakened: Evolving to Godhood, has it been dropped forever?
ch 279 The Righteous Knight vs Voss (Part-1)
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
the story is good but it has a lot of filler The problem isn't even the filler, because I like calm chapters with a little slice of life. but the author delays the development of the story a lot. the name of the book and lineage, but it took 200 chapters to release the lineage, a lot of delay, it took a lot of time. Another problem is that every time someone strong realizes that there is something inside their heart that will kill them, but everyone says they can't help. that's a lot of bullshit, even a dragon that must be thousands of times stronger than the person who put the thing in the mc, said he couldn't help him, I know it was a fragment of his consciousness, but it's still a lot of bullshit the dragon in be able to help. and even if they can't help they should warn the mc, but neither the man in the tower nor the dragon warned him, just the thing in his heart, that's ridiculous. Mystery is good, but that's what the author does is just mess around, pretending to be a mystery. What's the point of hiding this from MC? It doesn't make any sense for the man or the dragon not to tell him
Celestial Bloodline
Fantasy · _Orange_