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Wow! This is by far the best novel here. I am exceedingly happy, but I would be even happier if I could figure out to put it in my Library. To the Author: Please keep goingn you are a terrific story teller.
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Exodus: The Assassin's Path
Games · BotwaCazador
This Conference allows one to discuss incredibly difficult social and ethical questions.
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
Excellent! You managed to overwhelm the character's inate and societal biases. Good job!
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
Thank you for writing this book. I enjoyed it immensely. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
Hmm... I'm wondering if early Mohammed Ali was an inspiration here. Maybe the mixing of this 'Boxer' with the 'Maid'?
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
Excellent plot twist! And yet another example of humankind's ability to pervert Personal Protection Equipment into an offensive weapon for mere greed.
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
Test pilots are known to push systems to their limits... To determine what exactly those limits are. It's their job! Salma did her job.
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
Aww... Bias? Females have been historically proven to be both sronger and to have better reflexes than a comparably sized male. Social nuances aside.
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
Wow! I love the way you proved the axiom proclaiming 'Even detrimental accidents can have positive results'. Keep writing! Please.
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
Cool! Looks like it's going to get real interesting.
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
Excellent! The letter was a good touch, certainly a better approach than how my own dead-beat dad did with my siblings and I. Good surprise ending, too.
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
I really enjoyed this character setup; it demonstrates the the shields we erect to protect ourselves and others; because even the worst of us have reasons for being what we are and why. My hope is that the rest of the book is as well written. [img=recommend]
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The Suit-Maker
Sci-fi · Ghostman
While I'm enjoying the story itself, I'm pretty sure that I will not be paying a single penny to read any further. Too many grammatical errors and incorrect words that sound like the word that's supposed to be there. Again, great story! But please, please, use a program like Grammarly; it will help immensely.
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My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
GREET
Just by looking at him Quinn and Peter could tell he had been in a ruff fight. Bruises and scuff marks everywhere, Large cuts on his back. He looked like he had been in a tough battle. Not only that but Vorden didn't even great them when the two entered.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Time of PEACE, not piece.
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My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Peter's name should be capitalized .
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My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Excellent!
Exodus: The Assassin's Path
Games · BotwaCazador