globmand

1yr

Commented

good to hear that he doesn’t refrain from using azula because of pesky things such as the horrific ethical problems, but because of pride

'Besides I don't think I can talk to her anymore. She doesn't even come to the royal academy anymore. Yeah... The whole plan depends on a crazy and broken bitch. Not taking that route.'

Lord of Fire is a Gamer

Anime & Comics · Lowkeygoodstuff

globmand

1yr

Commented

its the three eyed RAVEN, man

This book has been deleted.

globmand

1yr

Posted

i don’t know how i have to be the one to point this out, but you have a spelling mistake in your synopsis. haven’t read this, so im just mirroring other reviews

The Reincarnated Falcon

Book&Literature · Theragfromthecrag

globmand

1yr

Posted

just like some other guy said, this is copied. original is the mountains range

The Modern Soul as Gregor Cleane (GOT) (ASOFAI)

Book&Literature · Game_of_thrones

globmand

1yr

Replied to God_of_hentai

i see another fello w vic tim of word finisher

He kidnapped people and turned them into gold statues, only for them to melt them and hand them to their families who were completely oblivious, sadly, his quirk only worked while he was alive, so after his death, a lot of body parts were found in banks around the world.

Rubber Human in MHA

Anime & Comics · BioedwinMX

globmand

1yr

Commented

there a big difference between used and sued to live in.

Before long, the car stops and my mom picks me up again and holds me against her chest while exiting the car. it is nighttime currently, we approach what I presume is our house, doesn't look too great but it's better than the orphanage that I sued to live in.

Rubber Human in MHA

Anime & Comics · BioedwinMX

globmand

1yr

Commented

finally a relateable reaktion to genderbending, because gender barely matters to who you are as a person

[Goddammit, I didn't specify what gender I wanted... oh well]

Rubber Human in MHA

Anime & Comics · BioedwinMX

globmand

1yr

Commented

just... at least one period. please.

I always liked the rain, a serene mood that brings forth a sense of comfort, calmness, and melancholy, feelings I'm familiar with, plaguing my mind constantly, making rain the only time when I'm feeling similar to those around me, edgy as it is, is the only real reason for me to like it.

Rubber Human in MHA

Anime & Comics · BioedwinMX

globmand

2yr

Posted

first of all, I want to make it clear that I think the story has potential there are, however, a couple of problems. now, the largest problem is honestly the writing, good thing is, writing is one of the easier aspects to improve. So, first of all, I advise you to scrap the whole *insert place* method, it takes the reader out of the flow of the story and is pretty easy to change. all you need to do is write something along the lines of, for example, "I was standing in the kitchen when I heard cracking noises from the stairs" instead of *kitchen* cracking noises were coming from the stairs. secondly, your story is allowed to meander a bit. now, I'm not saying that you should get into the habit of padding the text out with useless things people skip over. You can, however, make conversations a bit longer, not just by using more words, as that gets very boring very fast, but by taking your time to get to the goal of the conversation, this would also allow you to establish characters more clearly as you could allow them to bounce off each other for longer. thirdly, use the location you set yourself up to your advantage what I mean is, your character is in a school, the perfect setting for an exposition dump, so instead of giving your readers a wall of text to go through in the first chapter, just have a teacher give his class a lecture on history. fourth, readers don't need to know everything immediately, for example, you could just tell the readers the human side of Yogui's story in class as I advised earlier, and then have him find out about his own past later. it'll be more emotional for the readers as we have had the chance to connect with Yogui more, and it'll add an undertone of mystery to who his real parents could be if we find out early that he is adopted but without knowing where he is from. either way, that's just what I think. good luck with the writing. and like I said at the beginning, I truly think the story has potential, I'll check back in at some point and revise my review.

The Forgotten Wings

Fantasy · Yogurt_Garcia

globmand

2yr

Commented

and fertility! like with plants and stuff

"The Norse goddess of love, Seiðr, and sex," Bathsheda says as she runs her fingers over my chest.

The Skillful Lockhart

Book&Literature · LargeFarva

globmand

2yr

Commented

potato

(A/N: What food do you hate the most? Mine is probably celery)

Time Stops When I'm with Her. (MHA)

Anime & Comics · Hyberions

globmand

2yr

Commented

doesn’t increasing blood circulation just make them bleed out faster?

During the training sessions of a martial artist, it was easy for one to incur injuries. Thus, the academy prepared a kit of such in every single classroom to help boost the blood circulation of the wounded, as well as to temporarily ease the injury.

Library of Heaven's Path

Eastern · Heng Sao Tian Ya

globmand

2yr

Commented

oh buu huu, you’re maybe getting a god tier technique and you have to work a little bit to get it

It was actually quite troublesome and tiring to flip through a few thousand books like that. It wasn’t as simple as he thought it would be.

Library of Heaven's Path

Eastern · Heng Sao Tian Ya

globmand

2yr

Commented

with a trait like “extremely high defense” you would think it would have defensive abilities

Special Trait: When used to enchant a weapon, attack power will be greatly raised.

Forging The Path To Godliness

Eastern · King Demigod

globmand

2yr

Commented

ever heard the expression ‘don’t sell the skin before you’ve killed the bear’?

A person like Donald, in Ye Feng's eyes, was simply a clown, he could not even be bothered to deal with him. When trying to compete with an expert, the weaker party would always lose out regardless of result.

Forging The Path To Godliness

Eastern · King Demigod

globmand

2yr

Commented

yes! finally a mc who isnt incredebly sensetive to the point of slaughter over a less-then-nice comment!

But Ye Feng was not affected: "Oh? Is that so? Since the Blacksmith Shop is an insult to your noble status, why don't you leave, I am busy now, forgive me for not attending to you."