Moments 5
*beast
Teres stabs the slimy black creature with the two claws of his thumb and pointer. He tugs the last leech away from Ferrin's unconscious body. He places it onto a broad leaf along with the others. He then grabs onto the small wet cloth, which was another piece from the boy's chemise. He dabs it over the bloody spot where the leech had latched itself onto Ferrin. The beast had also previously changed the boy's bandages over the gash on his belly. He had placed a mix of healing herbs within them. The boy was sprawled out over the bedding. His body was entirely limp and cold. And most worrisome his lips were a daunting shade of blue. Teres had, again and again, placed his ear to Ferrin's chest, and thankfully each time heard the slow drumming of his heart. But it was light. Teres had an uneasy feeling. The boy was dying. He had tried to warm him with his body heat, but it wasn't just the cold that was killing him. He had also lost significant amounts of blood.
The Meek and The Beast
Fantasy · Lesbolord
I wanna know more about the village. This makes me want to know everyone in it. They seem like aholes though.
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The Meek and The Beast
Fantasy · Lesbolord
My only complaint is that the formatting is a bit weird and the paragraphs are long. But so far the story is really engaging. I like Teres best. He reminds me of a dog or cat wanting attention. Except scary. I know he's supposed to look scary but Imma just pretend he's attractive. lol. Is it bad I ship Hierance with Lavender? I think they're supposed to be enemies. Or at least he's an antagonist. But he'll be the other hottie. :) Will this have romance or steamy stuff btw?
The Meek and The Beast
Fantasy · Lesbolord