Badges 1
Moments 23
Is the author going to update the arts on reddit? All the same, so many new characters have been added, and the art has not been replenished for a long time. This is somewhat saddening.
This chapter has been deleted.
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
a little late but I think Sol is really stupid doing here, why cripple yourself completely if all you need to do is keep the priestess alive? Thus, you can lose 2 abilities and fulfill 1 of your made wishes (and not lose one more ability naturally), as he already said, even one wish would make him an expert. That is, he will not completely lose his potential and save the priestess . This would be the best solution, for me personally, in this situation. At this moment, I would leave the dragon characteristics (along with desire, of course), since this is the most reliable option of all, because then we did not know how many ability points he had, which is why the idea of contracts is not so attractive, and the loss of mana is so not at all serious against the background of the advantages of others. I think so. Sol didn't know then that this was all part of the plot and he was really ready to lose everything, without even thinking about the version I described or anything others, as a cliche of a hero, I think it's silly. From the outside, the authors could easily get out with the help of the goddesses, even including such a scene in the plot, that is, even if Sol proposed such an option, the goddesses could reject him, considering the option "boring" (after all, then they could not finish the bet as it should with such answer) and tell him to choose all or nothing. all this could be put in just one additional paragraph, but how much color it would add. It would show that Sol is different from his father (a cliche of the hero), that he is also ready to take risks and sacrifice himself for the sake of loved ones, but he does it thoughtfully. This is all my personal opinion, of course.
ch 35 CH 31: SAINT FALL (3)
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
already out on the author's website
This chapter has been deleted.
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Oh, clearly, it's okay, in the end it was my misunderstanding.
This chapter has been deleted.
My Reincarnation as a Chicken (Database)
Fantasy · Rados47
I don't know much about the language of emoticons, but doesn't an upside-down smiley mean sarcasm? At least Google told me that.
This chapter has been deleted.
My Reincarnation as a Chicken (Database)
Fantasy · Rados47
It's sarcasm ?
This chapter has been deleted.
My Reincarnation as a Chicken (Database)
Fantasy · Rados47
1) how big is the mortal world? Are there lands not under the control of 7 nations? After all, if not, then this world becomes noticeably smaller than ours. 2) What are the runes capable of? Is it possible to achieve abstract effects or only "stronger, sharper"? They are owned only by dwarfs and agels, or all, but only these two races are artful? And if we talk about the astral world, then this is a great place, as it allows you to do a good skip of time and full-fledged training of the protagonist for years, as it should be, and also for the development of the main love interest. Again, an ideal place for a story.
ch 183 CH 153: LEAVING (3)
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
I do not quite understand, Kali, like Sol, was born in this world or took the body of the original Kali? I remember that Medea said something about an abrupt change in Kali at a certain period of time.
ch 159 CH 133: REINCARNATED (2)
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
And if you are initially very lucky? How do you share your luck and the blessing you get? What if you use your luck to a minimum through careful planning? If there is some limit to luck or this "credit" can be taken endlessly, simply by dying earlier and more unsuccessfully after losing the blessing?
The more they used their luck, the faster they would die once they lost it.
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
What does Luxuria look like? I have always imagined her appearance as those of those sister goddesses from the fate of Babylonia, but I'm not sure how accurate this is.
ch 176 CH 149: LUXURIA (2)
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
By the way, have you already decided which way of development Hinotori will go? If I'm not mistaken, last time she was like a Frankenstein monster with different bloodlines without any particular weaknesses and was strong both physically and magically and there was resistance to all types of magic, in general, the usual path of the protagonist (or it was somewhat different, but I'm sure that she definitely chose the path "not like everyone else"). I think it would be fresh if you lead her along a certain path in order to make her an all-powerful juggernaut. Have you thought about making it a "pure" phoenix? It seems to me that it would suit her because "to die with the subsequent resurrection from the ashes" is just about her, metaphorically. Yes, and I read somewhere (though I don't remember where) that phoenixes eat dragons according to mythology. Well, that's just a random thought.
This chapter has been deleted.
My Reincarnation as a Chicken (Database)
Fantasy · Rados47
I’m all for it, but when I tried to enter the address from your page with tweeter and discord, they told me that the invitation was outdated and invalid. And it seems to me that I was already in your group in discord, but I can't find it, could you tell me its name?
This chapter has been deleted.
My Reincarnation as a Chicken (Database)
Fantasy · Rados47
-This is so? Strange, I seem to remember that they began to massively become hobgoblins, so massively that they even began to divide into different groups of hobgoblins and it was said that this was because they could finally fully and constantly eat and train? Well, then I was wrong.All the same, I read this for a long time. -So this means that in the past the form of the hobgoblin was almost standard, but as a result of degradation, we have what we have at the time of the beginning of history? Is it possible to say that the hobgoblin tribes have degraded to ordinary goblins? -And what about the system with its breaking of limits, well, if you have already thought of everything, then the flag is in your hands. I just re-read too many authors that went into a very strange jungle without having time to give another grand piano to the crowd so that she could keep up with the main character, I would not want you to follow the path of this cliché. Moderation is good in everything, I think so.
This chapter has been deleted.
My Reincarnation as a Chicken (Database)
Fantasy · Rados47
Oh, I forgot to finish, here is the full text: P.s By the way, while I was thinking about this, I had an idea for a rank system. How about introducing 2 tables for ranks, one for race rank and another for personal rank (you can say talent). The first serves as an indicator of your potential and the second how quickly and smoothly the existence can reach its peak. For example, a creature of rank D is born and lives its childhood as an E rank (all without exception), reaching maturity becomes a D rank (this rank can also be reached by everyone, but creatures with great talent will reach maturity faster) and some individuals can become the rulers of a race with a C rank (only for talented and diligent creatures) However, like us, no matter how talented a person is, there are limits that cannot be jumped without external help or if you are not an anomaly. What do you think of such a system? It seems to me that this is a rather interesting idea if brought to mind, albeit somewhat redundant.
This chapter has been deleted.
My Reincarnation as a Chicken (Database)
Fantasy · Rados47
Oh, and also, this is not a claim but a wish. I would have liked more interactions between Shiro Tatsumaki and Hinotori, to my regret the previous version did not get there. I am interested in their relationship after all that happened in the beginning and how they will react to each other. I am also interested in their, possible, closer relationship, if you understand me ; D All this is especially interesting given the fact that chickens consider the mother of the first person they see, I hope you somehow beat this in their interactions on the part of Hinotori. That's all, thanks if you read it.
This chapter has been deleted.
My Reincarnation as a Chicken (Database)
Fantasy · Rados47
The second thing I would like to talk about is names. The attitude towards them, taking into account their cost, is rather strange for me. If I am not mistaken, then giving a name is a permanent buff, with this everything is in order, the problem is in the price, or rather in its absence. After all, it only asks for your manna, which regenerates over time, that is, essentially free. Taking into account the effects of the name, I do not understand why the different leaders of the races that were weak and did not want to live like this did not start giving out names to everyone? The same goblins for example. And why does everyone have such a reverent attitude towards this, as if it were something limited or valuable if all that is needed is a being with manna and desire? As for me, instead of mana, it would be better to use the maximum amount of mana as valuable (for example, if the creature had 30/30 mana, then after the name of someone it will be 26/26), I even have a good explanation for this, that if the total amount of mana this is the volume and quality of the soul of a being, and by giving some creature a name you help it grow by giving a piece of your soul, this also creates a connection between you. It would also explain why being called a stronger and greater being is more beneficial and honorable (remember Shiraori). This is the best string for a name that I could come up with, and even if you didn't like it, then anyway, please, somehow limit this strange ability (for example, one creature can call a limited number of names or something else), otherwise it causes more questions than answers. Again, this is your book and the decision is only yours. I just expressed my opinion and wishes, since you are rewriting.
This chapter has been deleted.
My Reincarnation as a Chicken (Database)
Fantasy · Rados47
P.s By the way, while I was thinking about this, I had an idea for a rank system. How about introducing 2 tables for ranks, one for race rank and another for personal rank (you can say talent). The first serves as an indicator of your potential and the second h
This chapter has been deleted.
My Reincarnation as a Chicken (Database)
Fantasy · Rados47
Also, why didn't Mars clear the name of the witches? After all, the witches were his friends and comrades, and to clear their name (at least partially) is definitely no more difficult than the eradication of slavery, besides, this topic should be much closer personally to Mars, for the reasons written earlier. Now when I think about it, I don't understand it.
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI