Nathan_Hoehn - Profile

great story overall there are a few times when a name is swapped or the grammar is not perfect but it does not pull you away from the story

overall a very solid read. it does do the weak to strong trope well and occasionally the main character activates an ability that allows him to snag the win that makes the fight look good but also slightly cheated

great story with an amazing cliff hanger at the end. no major issues just a couple of occasions when either the characters gender or name would be a wrong

great story but I felt that towards the end it all felt rushed to finish it whether that was the original plan or it was done because the story didn't take off I have no idea