Weird as in I never heard of taco rice and where I live, tacos is the main food here.
"Uh-uh, I never get tired of taco rice." Eliana's nostrils flared out as she spooned more into her mouth.
Teen · Cuddles_Sempai13
*videogames
Oh okay. Thanks for answering.
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Fantasy · Lazy_leon
'My' needs to be capitalized.
"Come on, you can do it!" My brother yells from the bleachers causing everyone to look up.
Teen · MzMysteryy
Taco rice? Sounds weird.
"Uh-uh, I never get tired of taco rice." Eliana's nostrils flared out as she spooned more into her mouth.
Teen · Cuddles_Sempai13
change the comma to colons
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Teen · Cuddles_Sempai13
Good first chapter, the first paragraph was hookable; although, there are mistakes.
ch 0 1 She Opened Her Eyes
Teen · Cuddles_Sempai13
You don't have to capitalize after three dots; three dots are not the end of a sentence.
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Teen · Cuddles_Sempai13
'so' was a unnecessary word. Just keep 'as she did'
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Teen · Cuddles_Sempai13
When I see the name Frankenstein (felt like I needed to add that)
How can a man be this handsome? Whittaker used to believe that he is the most handsome man in the world, but after seeing Frankenstein his mind changed. Frankenstein was the most handsome man he had ever seen in his entire life.
Fantasy · Lazy_leon
All I think of is the literature Frankenstein.
How can a man be this handsome? Whittaker used to believe that he is the most handsome man in the world, but after seeing Frankenstein his mind changed. Frankenstein was the most handsome man he had ever seen in his entire life.
Fantasy · Lazy_leon
Why is it in another language? just wondering.
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Fantasy · Lazy_leon
Oh okay. This is the first time I actually saw it like this. Keep doing your thing if that is what you are used to.
"3.400!"
Duality
Fantasy · JohnnyKbca