a few grammatical errors but nonetheless an amazing story. plot is great, development is great. I like that it changes between characters viewpoints, regularly. bit just one or 2 but all. A mark of some kind between theses changes would be swell though.
General · JasmineJosef
amen to that! never want it to end! I love Lucian & Hazel....Klara on the other hand...
Fantasy · JasmineJosef
nooooo!
"I want you to marry my sister."
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a few grammatical errors but nonetheless an amazing story. plot is great, development is great. I like that it changes between characters viewpoints, regularly. bit just one or 2 but all. A mark of some kind between theses changes would be swell though.
Return of The Devil's Son
General · JasmineJosef