The synopsis is good, chapters are well written and intriguing. I love the fl and how she uses her powers, ML is cute and different. Work on the grammar a b it more Yuu. I liked it overall. Good luck💙👍
Fantasy · YuZee
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The synopsis is good, chapters are well written and intriguing. I love the fl and how she uses her powers, ML is cute and different. Work on the grammar a b it more Yuu. I liked it overall. Good luck💙👍
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Fantasy · YuZee