keep up the good work
nice
i like the personality of the main character he isn't afraid to change the plot just by a tiny bit
ch 0 6 Mana has it's Perks huh...
Fantasy · Neiryl
i think the mc shouldn't be open with the knowledge that came from his world as that might come back to bite him.
ch 37 There is no third option
Fantasy · Suiyan
is it safe to teach the natives of that world science? thats like giving a cave man a gun, ones every knows it they will be more deadly. as if they teach others about science thats gonna make them more powerful and getting enslaved by is higher
ch 33 Catching Blan's Attention
Fantasy · Suiyan
i will try to support you and thx for the chapter
ch 0 6 Chapter Six: Combat Assessment
Fantasy · ChloeThorne
is it ok for someone to write in the comment a gmail?
ch 0 5 Chapter Five: Cold Detachment
Fantasy · ChloeThorne
interesting concept. the writing needs a bit of work but it's good enough for me
Apoclysm
Sci-fi · Neitherite