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you didn't think about the fact that the characters could've used the favors to get him out of the tournament or for literally anything which gives them ridiculously large amounts of control of him because the end goal you had in mind was them using the favors to learn mana breathing and cleaning from Mc. You forgot common sense and wrote with the pre planned course of events without thinking how stupid they are and the gaps in the story.
ch 82 From Ally To Teacher
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar
yeah I probably couldve written the comment better, sorry, I was just kinda annoyed at the not so fluid writing .
The young man looked at the pretty boy whose eyes were cold as ice and felt a shiver run down his spine. He felt that if Derek really continued to bother this pretty boy, then the pretty boy would definitely do as he has said. Not wanting any more confrontation with the pretty boy, the young man picked up Derek and left the room with his other friends, who had not said a single word. Just seeing this made Yuki feel that real world people were all selfish. They did not want to get into a fight, so instead of trying to stand up for their friend, they stayed quiet the entire time. Such friendships can not be called friendships. Yuki's gaze fell on Trisha, who happened to be looking at her. Trish gave a faint smile and a slight nod of her head. Yuki nodded back before laying her head back down. Her mind went to the day when she hesitated and ended up getting Mary killed. She realized she was no better than those boys just now. But she would not continue like that. She will never hesitate again.
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
That night, Aito experienced a new kind of pleasure while discovering that the moderator could hold her breath for quite a long time.
Return of the Woodcutter
Fantasy · YoanRoturier
I'm really liking the story but oh my lord this grammar. You're making me die on the inside author.
Everyone then looked at Ace with a weird look, even Sampson gazed at him with a blank look. In the and Adrian said, "You are so lucky Ace. I never met a level 50 monster, let alone a giant monster. And gotten goodwill from a powerhouse just after meeting, it was so absurd."
Desolate World
Games · Ron_Azure
"No, just let them do their thing. In a way, this is good. Although Ryu is a girl in the real world in game she is a he, so the issues men get when they get hard and not get any release can be painful. I know this because I do it to that idiot all the time. But to think they even allowed such things as this." WhiteLotus could sympathize with the two, and she was not one to ruin anyone's fun. Plus, she herself couldn't help herself as she watched them. And that did not seem to be just her as Rose and Violet were secretly massaging themselves as well.
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh
While Ryu was trying to keep it cool, his lower member was not listening as it still grew in size. He couldn't help it, though, with how Chi kept moving around on his lap. Chi also noticed this, so in order to hide this fact, she got up and turned around and sat down back in his lap, allowing his dick to enter inside her. She bit her lip as she leaned back against Ryu's chest and used the muscles in her pussy to massage Ryu's dick.
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
Author: Where's the other .1%
When Yuki was pushed into her room, her eyes opened wide, seeing all the new things. She even had a new massive bed! "Pow!"(wow) She was really surprised.
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
She was embarrassed about what she had done. But if Ryu is truly Yuki, then she will no longer hold back, and she could finally free herself from this frustration. "I just hope Yuki really is Ryu… Otherwise, I might be in a bit of a situation..."
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
"No… It's fine… Umm, can you adjust it?" Things felt awkward, but the heat rising in her body was really causing her to feel funny. Earlier, along with the other messages, she got one that read "In Heat". She had no idea what it meant and had yet to check it out, but she knew one thing right now, and that was the thing pressing against her crotch was really…turning her on…
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
Yuki was also blushing from ear to ear. She wanted to scream! What the hell was this thing! Why did it suddenly decide to wake up and grow! She could only embarrassingly nod her head as she said: "Yes… It is..."
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
Trisha let out a sigh. She looked at the clock that still showed she had 15 minutes left before she could log in and closed her eyes. As she did, Yuki's face appeared in her mind. Not just her face but also her body that had not a single speck of clothing on. Trisha bit her bottom lip as her hand reached for her modest soft mound on her chest. In her mind, she scanned down Yuki's body, looking at her chest, her flat belly, and then the spot between her legs that had a small patch of black hair. Without even realizing it, her other hand had slipped between her legs. She had only rubbed a little bit when she suddenly left out a soft moan. "Mmmm… Yuki..." As soon as the name slipped through her lips, Trisha's eyes shot open, and all her actions halted. She felt the wetness between her legs and the stiffness of her nipples. "Am I really? Ahh! What do I do now!? "
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
ppl out here saying cats are better than dogs or dogs are better than cats. naw son FOX SUPERIORITY
Trisha blushed as this thought came to mind. "Am I weird? If Yuki is really Ryu, then wouldn't that mean I am falling in love with a girl?" Kicking her feet on her bed, Trisha buried her face into her fox plushie.
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
Yuki lowered her head and planted a kiss on top of Chi's forehead without much thought before looking up and taking a step forward, and placing her foot on the first step. As for Chi, she stared blankly at Ryu, her hand touching the spot he just kissed. She was confused but at the same time happy. Her ears twitched, and her tail wagged. She no longer wanted to get out of Ryu's embrace. Instead, she cuddled up into his chest, closing her eyes with two rosy cheeks and a smile on her face.
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
Wasn't it written earlier that the bastion is in elf territory like just south of an elf city, so he's just gonna establish his own nation in elf territory with like 0 population. Bro, what is this writing?
ch 282 Eating The Fruit
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar