Is the author 10 years old? Characters acting immature, capital letters everywhere, plot points that make no sense (why does she need to be transmigrated? Why give her an old dress when you're trying to show her off? Why make her attend if she might collapse and embarrass you?). Just 'the author got an idea and never thought about any of it'.
ch 12 Banquet (I)
Fantasy · Kamlyn
Calm down with the CAPITALS. They don't help. Just write "Something!" , he shouted. Like a normal person.
ch 0 9 The Crown Prince!!
Fantasy · Kamlyn
Well, she's useless as a parent, isn't she? Doesn't even try to explain anything or talk to the children. It's the 4th day and she hasn't fed or washed them once. They'd be better off raised by wolves.
ch 0 7 The Person Who Sent Her Food
General · Painted Green Garden
Needs proofreading. Or don't just MTL it. Lots, LOTS of language mistakes, hard to read.
ch 0 1 She clearly died
History · Si Jin
They're all sleeping together on the floor because they think there was an argument upstairs. These people are insane.
The family did not hesitate to lie on the floor in the living room and stare helplessly at each other.
General · Qiao Zhiyi
100 boxes of fresh milk? That's... dumb.
She took out one-third of her savings and bought 5000 catties of rice, 5000 eggs, 5000 barrels of instant noodles, 2000 catties of flour, 1000 boxes of cooking oil, a whole truck of salted meat and sausages, 1000 boxes of canned food for lunch, 500 boxes of canned fruit, and 100 boxes of fresh milk.
General · Qiao Zhiyi
That might be the stupidest thing I've read today. Armies for everyone, nothing can possibly go wrong here!
In Qilin empire, one can maintain their own army and can start secret organizations as long as they do not harm the throne. They exist as independent powers. Many such organizations are there but the sacred order is the most dangerous of them all. Even the emperor fears them and respects them.
History · neha_
Childish writing, nothing makes sense, characters act like silly kids.
I woke up as the Villainous Empress
Fantasy · Kamlyn