Webnovel Author: Phanton - Fanfic&Novel Collection

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well I hate NTR and its strange Branches so i WAS very happy upon seing the premise of the book, though reality fucked me over my disgust for NTR made me angrier than before and the result of the punishment isnt enough to make me calm down so against my own judgement its better i drop the book though i will stil give 5 stars

The Novel is good its just that... The way Issei is in the story gives me PTSD from some disgusting Chinese Novels, though i kinda like the Vibe of chinese novel this story has that in the first chapters i was thinking that it was a very very good translation

Well well well, i could be wrong about this because im stuck in MTL hell for the past few weeks, but i can say with confidence this novel is the only thing that makes my day, look this is not the most perfect novel i ever saw the power system is meh, characters development and design are ok (for now), the world development is good just a little disperce but its good for now we're on the first stages of the novel for fuck sake the stability of updates are very good the autor is not commiting suicide with 9 characters a day nor he is spaming bad quality chapters, the dude alredy gives 1/2 chap for a day with good quality im more than satisfied with this, the mystery is a good touch this novel is alredy diferent from the poison i taste every single day and that enougth for me. Oh i almost forgot make a damn patreon this novel has very good potential dont trow it away

Shit i sent keep the good work 2 times what a shame

Look its kinda slow because of the distribution of content on the chapters but is also much better than the flash like speed that the first had. the thing of the change of the baseline reality (Canon) of the original was a nice touch just... in the first the relationship of the MC with Harry's sister was too much forced atleast in the first 20 chp of the original where i just stoped so dont know much about that but just make characters that have a bit of realism and dont mess up the blank characters that we have. the first was so bad at character design that i lost interest in 20 min. anyway you could expand the world more than the original harry potter it will be good. if you do that make things simple and "human" like basecally everything that made my experience less than desirable was better atleast for now all i see on this new version is a Harry potter fic with great potential and a autor with more vision and experience than the Last? Time so keep the good work i have great hope on this you so keep the good work[img=recommend]