Webnovel Author: AstralNinja420 - Fanfic Collection

End this story or yourself dawg because it is stupid like I get it and the title an all but like give someone more useful but won’t be useful in the grand line like how luffy’s crew was pretty strong for east blue then barely able to compete with the first half of the grandline do a crew slightly worst than that and bada bing bada boom worst crew in one piece your isn’t the worst it is straight ass like straight double do’s useless

It has potential but it is so damn boring I can’t barely read it for one and for two Riki wouldn’t force someone to play basketball so forcing him to play ruins the story as a whole

You shouldn’t make Tao lung evil because I like how he was previously but going on a journey to find his path would’ve been better

Get rid of the story that is what the author need

Mcu never had mutants and really instead of Tony stark it’s Tony stain nah bro correct your story