This was a horrible chapter.
ch 68 68 - Attack
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Would McGonagall really be one of the few who do so or perhaps better to say one of the few who actually reports it to the government?
I finally completed my first week of classes at Hogwarts, the classes are very interesting. For example, Professor McGonagall is one of the few people in Europe who mastered a magical skill called animagus transformation. She can turn into a cat which she used on the first day of her class to impress the other students. My head of house is a half-goblin. He is very short (He has to stand on a pile of books in class) but a nice and competent teacher. He even was a dueling champion in the past. Most of my Teachers are nice, but some are very strict. Like Professor Snape, but I believe I am one of the few students he maybe likes since I am a natural talent in potion and brewed a perfect cure for boils in our first lesson.
Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee
A possible interesting story premise held back by mediocre writting, mediocre plot building and mediocre character building. The author doesnt bother trying to write better or longer chapters either. The writting style feels like one of those horrible Wuxia translations with horrible sentence structure and every character acting lime a moron. Later the author tells us Occlumency can stop the mutant Rogue power from affecting him. Utter stupidity. When will people learn that the only thing Occlumency does is stop Legilimency and thats it.
MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
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