Do keep it as it is. Its one of the more unique plots I have seen in a Marvel fanfic and I am enjoying it so far.
Do I keep the story as is? This will mean that a chapter will be released almost everyday. The soulmate would remain the same as is etc.
Movies · Mrsmayhem
I think it works too. Its not that confusing and kinda cute. They're both hard-to-read women but they act like a strict mom/daughter duo.
So, let me know about the whole 'Agapi' and 'Mitera' thing. I think it works, and I quite like the sound of them. If you think they are confusing though, I will stop using them, at least as much as I did here.
Anime & Comics · Ketsueki_Hasu
I read this is in a manga but the informal equivalent of aniki in female term is anego.
I haven't decided yet, feel free to suggest alternatives.
Anime & Comics · Immortal_Orca
I'd say keep the system but put some focus on the world building. I think that having Jin have a prominent societal role due to being a princess should have more explanation on how they actually made their nation be recognized by the world as a whole and not something that's just passively mentioned.
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its safe to be prepared than nothing/ do nothing*
The reason I wanted to teach Ryõta, the technique is to make him strong who knows if there's an unknown enemy wanted to kill him, and also there are many enemies that grandfather offended, it safe to be prepare done nothing.
Anime & Comics · sigufo
"I could only cover my ears" can replace that phrase and you should put a period instead of a comma because both sentences can stand alone.
Soon sister Lily came running apologizing to Asta for using a spell on him without thinking and Asta went back to insisting that he wanted to marry her, I could only put my mother in my ears to avoid all that fuss and continued walking towards the skull on the hill.
Anime & Comics · patinhoDEUSVULT
picked up*
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Anime & Comics · FallenEclipse
Thanks for the chapter. I know that you're aiming for some character development but the progress in this chapter is kinda vague, it seemed to be a passing thought which is good because I feel that you're intending to have at least an entire chapter for that.
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Anime & Comics · Super_Surprised231
imma guess its viego
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Anime & Comics · Abhrf
oooh miss fortune. Huh didn't expect a league character but a pleasant surprise nonetheless.
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Anime & Comics · Abhrf
jm confused is anker supposed to be anchor?
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TV · Hela698
Looking forward for the new story💚. I trust that this story is in good hands since I am also looking forward for ms. ally's ff now that she's back.
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Book&Literature · PettyPrincess66
Congrats Author!💜 More success to you!
I'm sorry, I wouldn't be able to upload a chapter. I just graduated today and I have to celebrate, so yeah, but I'll upload tomorrow.
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Anime & Comics · SALTANDPEPPER_1