Again, for the first chapter this is still really good.
ch 0 1 Pain
Anime & Comics · The_One_3348
With just the first chapter, this is pretty good.
ch 0 1 The Bird Flies Part 1
Anime & Comics · The_One_3348
Do you know when you’ll next update?
ch 22 Chapter 21
Anime & Comics · kokishorttail
A certain blonde- “ the disturbance makes me feel proud”
I think I've said this before but I'll say it again. Vali uses his allowance on either two things. Ramen or training equipment.
Anime & Comics · Shonpufi
*in another universe* A certain blond- “I feel a disturbance in the ramen” A certain revenge driven ravenette- “dobe what are you talking about?”
I think I've said this before but I'll say it again. Vali uses his allowance on either two things. Ramen or training equipment.
Anime & Comics · Shonpufi
Do or do not there is no peace
"41st Millenium tech is that advanced huh? I better let the League know about him, though he doesn't seem to be evil."
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
Author, do you know approximately when you will update again?
ch 22 Chapter 21
Anime & Comics · kokishorttail
Are you taking a break for the holidays?
ch 22 Chapter 21
Anime & Comics · kokishorttail
Nice and interesting choices, mate.
ch 18 Chapter 17
Anime & Comics · kokishorttail
Also thank you for this chapter, author. Please update again soon. Have a nice day.
ch 18 Chapter 17
Anime & Comics · kokishorttail
While I don’t know much about Egyptian mythology, I looked up some stuff. My recommendation is Ptah, the Egyptian god of craftsmen and architects. But like previously mentioned, I don’t know a lot about the Egyptian pantheon. I also don’t know Ptah’s personality, although I would recommend making Ptah’s personality at least a bit OC.
ch 18 Chapter 17
Anime & Comics · kokishorttail
Welcome back, author. We welcome your return with joy, as this is an excellent story.
ch 68 HELOOOOOOOO
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Anime & Comics · Karstag