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I'm going nuts over his idiocy.
"Of course there is more. This is just the beginning." Shawn was obviously in a good mood as he didn't seem to notice the complaint in Johnson's tone.
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Urban · Beautifiedg1
You're doing a great job!
However, if there is anything you are not comfortable with, feel free to air it as I am open to criticism and also as this is my first time writing, I know that my writing style might not be perfect. But with you wonderful people solidly behind me, it will turn out better than imagined.
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Urban · Beautifiedg1
Finally!!!
Eleanor's eyes went wide with shock. It was the man in the news with her mother.
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Urban · Beautifiedg1
😆😆😆 Out of the mouth of babes. 🤣😂🤣
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Urban · Beautifiedg1
Actually. I thought that his trying to get her to stop talking without telling her the situation at the time was to try and not embarrass her in front of Cindy but her arrogant spoiled personality just wouldn't let her shut up.
Eleanor didn't believe him at all. "But you used me in your revenge plot against Cindy Clarke, dragging me into it."
Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!
General · Like Dawn
Where in the world did the name "Anderson" come from?!
Upon hearing this, Cindy Anderson secretly let out a sigh of relief.
Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!
General · Like Dawn
Such a good story but the issues with names in this chapter make it a frustrating read!
But once the Restaurant got into trouble, they would definitely think of finding Wendy again.
Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!
General · Like Dawn
What does that last statement mean? "Go to heaven"?
"When I support you, I'm Papa. Now that I flicked you on the head, it's abuse?" Adrian complained, "Why don't you go to heaven?"
Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!
General · Like Dawn
Wow! An apartment with more than 60 floors!? Where do those exist!?
"Heaven Liu." The corner of his mouth curled up into a smirk, licking his upper lips. "How did she know we lived in the same building?"
I transmigrated and got a husband and a son!
Urban · BAJJ
What does 60th floor mean?
Heaven slowly took out the flower from his wineglass, placing it on his plate to let it drip on his food. "Don't go beyond the 60th floor."
I transmigrated and got a husband and a son!
Urban · BAJJ
You should have ignored the "past" question. It's only going to get you in trouble lying like that. argh. I'm so annoyed at you Henry but I guess you're young emotionally.
"I haven't answered your question yet," Henry said. He hugged her tighter, ensuring that Kate couldn't lift her head, then continued, "I never had that kind of plan. I never planned to hurt you, not in the past, present, or future."
He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband
Urban · ForeverPupa
That's a different question altogether! How did that come up? Because he was stupid and avoiding the first question! Stupid boy.
"Answer it, Henry. It's a simple yes or no question," Kate said firmly. "Did you ever have a plan to give our baby to Marlon, yes or no?"
He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband
Urban · ForeverPupa
Why is Henry being so stupid? The answer is he has NO intention of doing that. And that's not a lie there may have been a point in time before he knew her that it was a plan but he doesn't have to even tell her that or can soften the story if wants to come clean, but he can first and foremost honestly promise her he has no intention of that now.
The more Henry began dodging the simple question, the more pain she experienced.
He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband
Urban · ForeverPupa
"If an apology was what you wanted, then you shouldn't have cut off his head."
I transmigrated and got a husband and a son!
Urban · BAJJ
Set him straight Mindy!
Mindy's eyes got colder as she stared at her boss, "Henry, why do you keep talking about yourself? What about her?"
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Urban · ForeverPupa
That was my thought when she'd the attacked had thin wrists.
In the past, Paula was the only person his wife would talk to. She was the only person — besides Miriam — that could go in and out of Heaven's room. That was the very reason Paula Shen could go in and out of the mansion anytime she pleased. It was also the very reason Dominic helped Paula to grow her stagnant career.
I transmigrated and got a husband and a son!
Urban · BAJJ
Not good enough. You're digging your hole deeper and deeper.
Henry tightened his grip on Kate's hand, scared that Kate would leave him, "Now you see why I don't want to bring you to my family. I'm ashamed that my family is ruined, and I don't want you to meet my bastard father and his bitch mistress. I fucking hate them."
He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband
Urban · ForeverPupa
Oh Henry! Listen to your gut. You need to talk to Kate and tell her everything! For her own and the baby's safety if nothing else! preempt it with how much you love her and will protect her and make her promise to listen to it all before reacting. Better coming from you than Sarah, Erin, or who knows else!
But it was just a gut feeling. Of course, he couldn't accuse Sarah of such a thing because that would make him unreasonable.
He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband
Urban · ForeverPupa
Yes. Waaaay overboard. They are 5 even if they are geniuses. They never met him as their father. It's really bothering me that he's going to basically shoot himself in the foot by doing too much and having way too many expectations of the dinner.
Hi guys, what do you think about Shawn's behavior so far? Do you think he is overdoing it and should slow down?
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Urban · Beautifiedg1