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1 Kagura could be a good pick since she could be his rival in sword arts too.

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Well ideas that come to mind are forming a club while at Hogwarts that could be magical or could be intermixing stuff from the muggle world like books, manga, movies, tv shows or games. Improving your physicality with stuff like learning dance, a fighting style, gymnastics or parkour could be both fun and useful, wouldn’t hurt to have a fit body for what’s to come so incorporating stuff like that into dodging would be useful in duels instead standing in one place while casting or having spells clash where whoever’s gets over powered is just a sitting duck. Maybe go deeper into magic with spell crafting since we know even Snape was able to make his own spells while in school; so take inspiration from other fictional works with magic from books, tv, anime, video games, and etc. Later in the series he could take on a apprenticeship as a next step for what he wants to master, prior to that possibility training, teaching, and learning with his peers and those in the younger years. Looking into incantations, rituals, other focuses besides wands, familiars, as well training in wandless & silent casting while keeping realistic that he and whoever he trains with wouldn’t be overpowered instantly. For summer arcs could have the family travel, we don’t really know much about the wider world. Could use stuff from the Magical Beast prequel series or even have him meet someone from the casts family tree whether it be Newts or anyone else. Traveling also poses the possibility of other fandoms being present in the world since things like Supernatural, Twilight, Teen Wolf, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Bleach, Shadowhunters, Being Human, Yu Yu Hakusho, Digimon, Bleach, Sailor Moon, The Magicians, Katekyo Hitman Reborn!, Percy Jackson & the Olympians could be present with you none the wiser since each of those works kept their existence hidden like the Wizarding World did in Harry Potter. Might even be needed to look into history to see if what’s known about Merlin has any connections to stuff like Kingdom Hearts or the show Merlin. Also stuff like BBCs Sherlock Holmes, Kingsmen, Mission Impossible, Fast & Furious, Luther, Bones, Criminal Minds, Mac Guyver, Friends, The Big Bang Theory, Shameless, or etc could be going on in the muggle world as real. Even stuff like Marvel, the MCU, DC, the CWs Arrow-verse, Lucifer, or Young Justice, could be something in the future since Harry Potters first year at Hogwarts was from 1991-1992 and anything from there that might prove the existence of it being present later like cities or well known figures could prove it but wouldn’t cause a red flag when investigated that ends with you on a government list. Your character also needs a goal besides survival though, what does he want in the world, are there any changes he’d like to influence on the world or anything he’d like to dedicate his time to once the Magical World isn’t in crazy fluxes of danger. At the end of the day you have plenty of options on where to take this story, I look forward to seeing what you put out though. Keep up the great work 👍

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I’m liking where this is going, it’s well paced, he has a plan to get stronger but isn’t automatically over powered, and the self inserts interactions with the setting as well as the characters are genuine. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. As for pairing well there’s at least seven years of story to cover based on cannon, you could even extend it as needed too so while I hope end game is with Harry who says you can’t date other characters before getting to who he stays with for the finale. Have him date a couple of characters along the way; maybe one of his year mates like Draco, someone older like Fred or Victor, or even maybe someone a year younger in the later chapters like Colin since I imagine he’ll want to save characters from their cannon demise so he gets closer to help better characters like Fred and Colin. Anyway great work so far and excited to see what happens next. 😁👍

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