Keep the chapters longer! I like being immersed in the story and longer chapters assist diving into the world you've created. Additionally, I hate missing details and big holes in a story. So far, I'm very pleased with the progression, kingdom, and character building. There's also no obvious information dumps and flows quite well. [img=update]
ch 190 Individual Teaching II
Fantasy · HideousGrain
lol, what a way to describe a spear
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Fantasy · Drip
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 269 Rough First Day
Fantasy · Random_writer
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 165 Bullfrog
Fantasy · Random_writer
So that's what has been wrong with me! I like crazy women!... Yup, makes sense. [img=strong]
ch 122 Chapter 122: My mother-in-law is obsessed with me.
My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann