The character's are great! You're writing is already amazing, too. Needs some work on transitioning scenes and POVs. The vocabulary level is also high. I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing. I think some editing from a fresh eye will do wonders for the story. Keep it up!!!
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The character's are great! You're writing is already amazing, too. Needs some work on transitioning scenes and POVs. The vocabulary level is also high. I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing. I think some editing from a fresh eye will do wonders for the story. Keep it up!!!
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