Badges 3
Moments 16
this..somehow doesn't feel like a vrmmo anymore
ch 25 Chi Part 2
Soul Fusion Online
Games · invayne
my thoughts exactly. would be better if author changes the name to something like "double/two swords mastery"
ch 0 4 Opening Skill and Talent Trees
NPC into Player: Let's Wreck This Game
Games · ranmaro
Good story so far, but I've noticed that from the first chapter the amount of mistakes in using "to" and "too" as well as "there" and "their" is quite a lot. Its really annoying to read and breaks the flow, hope you get an editer or fix before uploading
ch 33 The Trial of Monrell II
The Ancients World
Games · easyread
So good so far author! Keep it up
ch 13 Scorpion
The Heroes’ Reincarnation
Games · UnableToOpenDoor
Good stuff so far author!
ch 12 An Interesting Old Man
The Heroes’ Reincarnation
Games · UnableToOpenDoor
'ITS ALIIIIIVVEEE'
ch 39 Embarrassing Moments Are Hard To Forget
The King's Mandate: Anomalous System
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
There are so many typos in this chapter, there usually are one or two but this one is straight up filled. Please fix
ch 34 At The Entrance Of The Labyrinth.
The King's Mandate: Anomalous System
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
I'm really loving this so far, but I have a huge issue with the stats. Idk maybe later on having stats in the thousands is the normal, but I generally prefer starting from stats of "1" or "10" max, it just looks much neater
ch 0 6 Let's Test My New Skill
The King's Mandate: Anomalous System
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
Seems promising so far
ch 0 1 Intermediation
The King's Mandate: Anomalous System
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
Okay so the story build up has been PHENOMENAL so far. Keep it up!
ch 12 Tavern and an update
A New World, an immersive game experience
Games · Breuno
I'm currently around chapter 40, and so far I have really enjoyed the book. HOWEVER, there is one thing that has been bugging me ever since chapter 1.. the writing style. While I am extremely happy that there aren't many grammatical mistakes (almost none to be honest, which is rare), the author uses far too many simple sentences that it feels like reading a 1st grader's book. "Isaac likes to sing. he enjoys it. Sophia, on the other hand, doesn't. Alice likes her elder brother." Of course, the content of the above example is made up, however, the sentence structure is identical to the story. The author needs to stop having 1 line paragraphs and minimise the use of simple sentences
White Online
Games · Alekzi