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Hayden_Warburton

Hayden_Warburton

male LV 15

Vivid reader and aspiring author. I haven't started my own novel yet as I wish to read more and experience other people's imaginative minds.

2020-09-22 Joined United Kingdom

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The ghoul from the woods that disappeared in the earth.

The creature moved in a straight line, quickly reducing the distance that separated them from the humans.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

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it's been proven that meat isnt the best source for that as your body will lack endurance. veg is apparently the way to go

"Do like I did when I was at the academy. Train until your muscles hurt, eat meat, use light magic to assimilate the food and rebuild your tissues. Rinse and repeat until you are too tired to continue."

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Hayden_Warburton
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little similar to his own shadow in appearance but yellow eyes

The black creatures were back, but this time their numbers were beyond calculation. Thanks to his heightened sense, Lith could see that they were not the same as the last time. They had a lipless mouth, filled with multiple rows of fang-like teeth and a single red eye shining in the middle of the forehead.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Hayden_Warburton
Hayden_Warburton
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so his offer is to cull humans?

He had grown sick of mankind's madness; a culling was needed. Unbeknownst to him, the world had heeded his call and was considering the offer.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Hayden_Warburton
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hey I'm 11, I told my mom what you wrote and she said stay away cause people like you are possible paedophiles

'I can only hope that when they grow up, my sons will be able to mend their relationship. I can't force them to get along.' Raaz thought.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Hayden_Warburton

0-200 pages is an extremely good read. The system idea is a popular one and the author uses it extremely well. The MC development is shown to all as he goes from a innocent child with power who is completely new to the prospect of living for real to his thoughts that lack any negative emotions to eventually develop to a point of his own understanding of family and camaraderie. Also it's nice to read something where the main MC is overpowered as cultivation novels can get a little... Frustrating non the less as he or she is always running away with their tail tucked between their legs or laying low which eventually gets boring and I lose interest as they all sing the same tune. Now for the bad parts. Unfortunately at act three I believe is when everything becomes hard to keep me as reader fixated with the novel as I found my self skipping a lot of pages. The MC no longer feels like the centre of the story any more as it focuses on his summons to much and fills us with to much information about them that i find non consequential. Also it goes on for to long. Then after all that the MC is beaten and weekend which is got the final nail in the coffin for my attention span for this novel. Started great and then completely spirals out of my( as a readers ) line of attention. That's why to story development for me felt backwards completely. I didn't read to the end unfortunately so maybe he becomes more powerful and gets revenge but isn't that a bit to obvious, as soon as that thought cropped up I lost all interest as I could already imagine how the story was gonna progress. The Author has a lot of potential and I'll still attempt to read future novels. However please consider what your readers want as it's their attention you want to to captivate unless your writing just for your own satisfaction then fine I guess.

Hayden_Warburton
Hayden_Warburton
Hayden_Warburton
Hayden_Warburton
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Don't judge me I know how to count! 1..3..4..6! seeeeeee.

[You have acquired the [Black Magical Jewel Orb of the Forbidden One], [Black Exoskeleton of the Forbidden One], [Left Black Pincer of the Forbidden One], [Right Black Pincer of the Forbidden One], [Black Deadly Jaws of the Forbidden One] and [Deadly Venomous Stinger of the Forbidden One]!]

Epic of Vampire Dragon: Reborn As A Vampire Dragon With a System

Epic of Vampire Dragon: Reborn As A Vampire Dragon With a System

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

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Fuck me I feel like something is becoming so obvious here. Marlene dies. The other Christie takes over and use that legendary scroll mijigy to revive her...

Rhode puckered his brows. Of course, he knew who Christie was talking about. But now… She actually wanted Christie to head into the Land of Chaos? Rhode shifted his gaze between Marlene and Christie.

Summoning the Holy Sword

Summoning the Holy Sword

Games · Siberian Cat

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Anyone from London reading this 😉

Lauren couldn't help but fume. Her Royal Highness Lydia had shown discontentment toward the Mercenary Association in terms of managing the disturbances caused by the group of bastards and now, this idiot caused another trouble for him. Damn it, he really thinks that I don't dare to touch him simply because he has the backing of a bunch of cock-sucking southerners?

Summoning the Holy Sword

Summoning the Holy Sword

Games · Siberian Cat

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is it possible that Rhodes is the Heir of the Void Dragon?

Under the shine of the magical radiance, the drafted Limitless Void Astrology and shining spots of stars in the dome linked up and formed a soaring huge dragon with its wings spread open. It lifted its head high and overlooked from above.

Summoning the Holy Sword

Summoning the Holy Sword

Games · Siberian Cat

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when did this become a comedy all of a sudden 😂

Inside the ghost ship, Boo patted its chest and muttered with a serious expression. "A great man once said, 'If you grew up as a virgin, it's not your fault. But if you died a virgin, it's definitely your fault'. Don't worry, master, Boo will teach you the perfect skills."

Divine Path System

Divine Path System

Fantasy · _Transcendent

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Noooo whycant the Dao of Cultivation stop following me!

If he thrashed Narcis, a Level 3, his elder brother would seek revenge. Then his father. Then his grandpa. If alive, even his great grandpa would come.

Divine Path System

Divine Path System

Fantasy · _Transcendent

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