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So 'he' is actually a 'she', but 'she' herself is oblivious to that. Did you just pull a Keel from Rising of the Shield Hero? Because Keel as well didn't know she was a girl until everyone pointed it out for her and thought all her life that she was a man. And in all honesty, I never expected that at all, you just know how to surprise us huh?

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I wonder what is God's opinion on these "followers". Good chapter by the way!

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Take your time 馃憤

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Ooohhh the foreshadowing of a tragedy... With only us readers along with God, Ainz who is now allied with the former and anybody else who knows about the Grail, will realise that it will never grant true wishes and would only corrupt them instead. Nice.

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For the comment below about a harem and Xshamee replying to it. I see where Xshamee comes from. What makes a harem story bad is the fact that it always focuses on the the MCs doing...that...with their parties and not give two to three damns about the plot at all. If anything, 80% of the story would be about "that" and the remaining 20% is about a plotline that's not even well planned out at all. But this story can erase any of these troubles by the doing the following. First and the most important point, keep the harem to a minimum, and that would be just Artoria and God, and nobody else. Since these two are ones who Ainz seems to relax with the most, aside from his adoptive daughter Sakura and the angels from heaven who he could also start to see as his children considering that he will be taking God's role since she tricked him into more responsibility. And proof of this is Issei pervert Hyoudou, who's only goal in life is to be "the Harem King!". Which not only is cringe worthy, put gives me the urge to beat him into an non-recognizable pulp. And Ainz seems to fulfill my urges of beating him up by potentially doing that to him if Issei eyes Artoria, Sakura, Gabriel (since following the dxd timeline would mean that Ainz would take her to the conferences between the three factions along with Michael and would lead to Ainz seeing her as a daughter as well) or even God, if Ainz decided to reveal to every one that it was a trick all along. Two, is that the fact that in Harems it's somehow always about groping, inappropriate touching and other kinds of unspeakable stuff that for the innocence of the younger readers I will not mention, will do and would never focus on the plot at all. Yet for Ainz that wouldn't affect him considering his emotional suppressor being still in effect which would limit his already non existent libido along with his already existing morals of respecting women and not having enough courage to dare to do more than just a kiss or a hug (and this is actually canon by the way) since to him would make him think that he is acting like a douchebag, which would make him likeable as a character for the audience. And what would solve this issue is to only put what could put only be described as wholesome moments. Ones that would make you go "aa***..." or "that's so sweet". And besides, going with the plot that Ainz is an undead, God is a pure being and Artoria being a cinnamon roll who may think of herself as a badass when it comes to love but overheats and starts fumbling when someone just compliments her. It would be pure heresy to say that they should do more than wholesome moments, and I mean the type of heresy that would need to be burned with Holy Fire Warhammer40k style. And adding to the first point of not going beyond two which are already Artoria and God in this series is because whether you like it or not you harem loving weirdos, that's what makes these types of romance stories bad. Too much characters would result in the need of focusing only on romance to give the harem a "time to shine". But with limiting the amount of characters, each would get their part of the story or 'arc' and romance would be just a breath of fresh air after tension-filled scenes like a declaration of war or a character being in the middle of an existential crisis doubting themselves and if what they did up to that point would even matter. And it would allow the audience to choose their favorite character which wouldn't need to be the MC who is somehow always the one the story focuses on. Soooo... Yeah... That's all I have to see about the matter and... Thanks for reading this comment I guess?

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Noice, now I'm patiently waiting for another chapter.

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So Ainz and God tricked everyone into believing that God is dead? Huh, that's actually pretty smart. So the other factions are now afraid of the one who "killed" God and aren't sure about making a move. Good thinking馃憤

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If you want a suggestion, then how about focusing on the great war between the angels, fallen and devil and then Trihexa? You can do so while shedding some light on what Sakura is doing from time to time in between, since she can literally be described as Ainz's agent in the mortal world. This way you can follow the chronological order of the dxd timeline. And because for one, all of us are curious about the war and how Ainz will change the original events for the war and Trihexa, since God left her responsibilities to Ainz, how would he handle the war and Trihexa? Would he seal Trihexa or make her bend the knee to him, and would doing so make the other two factions, the fallen as well as the devils, fear him and ask for a truce since they wouldn't want to fight Trihexa, if he makes her his servant, or someone who beat Trihexa, or would their pride overtake them and refuse to surrender even if they have to fight her or Ainz? Because let's be realistic, you can't just make one small epilogue about how Ainz is now the leader of the angel faction and expect us to say fast forward for no reason. I am sure I'm speaking for some of the readers when I say all of us want to see what Ainz will do now. And afterwards you can do the Issei timeline and then grand order. This may be a bit selfish but I honestly want to see how Ainz will affect the world of dxd during Issei's time. For example how would Ophis react to him since both of them are extremely similar in their void-like presences. Or how would the other Pantheons react to Ainz after he dealt with Trihexa or in the future during Issei's time if they didn't meet him in the past? And considering that Ddraig is conscious, how would he warn Issei about Ainz when the conference between the three factions occurs? And the bigger question, how would Ainz treat Issei in the future? Since the boy would be willing to strip any woman with his perverted powers, how would Ainz treat him if he tries to do that to God (since it seems that Ainz cares for her since he doesn't want her to worry when Michael asked if he should ask God on her opinion on the dealings of Trihexa) or Artoria? Would he outright kill the boy? Torture him? Or just beat him up senseless? Either way, just like I said before in previous suggestions, I would still read this great series even if you don't take my suggestions into considerations, especially considering that this is a gem among the other stories on the site which are just bland and annoying. But I guess even that would be an insult to compare this masterpiece to those other books. And it is your story above all else, so have faith knowing that this story is already above hundreds of other stories on all fanfiction sites and is in the upper echelons of the best overlord crossover stories there is.馃憤

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