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After reading 70 chapters of the story, I couldn’t shake the feeling that I had been greatly deceived somewhere. I didn’t see any canonical characters or canonical events, just boring everyday life. There is no place for everyday life and teenage drama in cyberpunk; it is a cruel world in which you can only survive. I expected a cyberpunk story, but what I got was a snotty drama. I expected to see a reasonable and mature protagonist, but what I got was a stupid teenager and a pathetic henpecked character. Who likes to read about a degenerate with eighth-grader syndrome? Very disappointed.

The protagonist of the story is a typical omega character with inferiority complexes. This completely negates any merits of this story.

In simple words, the story is corrupted. Pointless. The author gives the protagonist power, then to take it away. Further, to make the world of anime everyday not seem boring, he adds the supernatural, which I find an extremely stupid act. Long story short, you tried bro and you screwed up.

61 chapters behind and the group chat still hasn't been shown. What is it, a mockery of the author or ordinary laziness? As for me, this is both laziness and mockery of the reader. The story goes at a snail's pace, slowly and reluctantly. The characters of the story are a faceless gray mass. The main character is just as gray and uninteresting. In fact, the only thing that can attract in this story is a chat group, which does not exist in the story.

Everything is very bad. I don't even mention the battles of 7 year olds with grown men. Worst of all, the protagonist is an ordinary extra and mediocrity running errands for his brothers.

Too much drama. Too many inappropriate jokes on the verge of sadism towards the protagonist. It's just impossible to read. Fuck this is crap. Perhaps the author is a masochist and a dumbass.