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"Che, a 'kid's' head is all I touched. In a few years, your body will develop and you will be able to prove that you are a man." Tsunade said. (I give up, maybe this will be R-18)
Anime & Comics · Hiddenveil
or magic
ch 26 Chapter 25:Trial of the Forest eyes.
Book&Literature · TacetIrae
It would be cool if he takes the wolf as his pet and make him strong using alchemy.
ch 26 Chapter 25:Trial of the Forest eyes.
Book&Literature · TacetIrae
what the f?!? I was expecting Jariya to have heritage with some clans. maybe some relatives from Senju clan . Just look how similar he is to Tobirama Senju. Jariya has very strong physic , sensor like Tobirama. He was able to become sage like Hashrima. Just wanna say that he can't be a simple orphan with no bloodline. All strong characters in Naruto have strong bloodline.
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Anime & Comics · Sennengoroshi
This fantic is great. Just the update is slow.
ch 0 9 Desires
Anime & Comics · Reidrain
Karin is taken?
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Anime & Comics · XxNaRuToUcHiHaxX
Was good until he said he would join the Marine. Good bye
ch 0 5 Leaving Little cage Island
Anime & Comics · FanficMortal
F**k, I love finfic about Asgard or any Mythology. although there were things that could be improved in this fanfic but the whole idea was awesome. I hope author will rewrite it. and recommend that you get some knowledge from Comics if you are going to write fanfic about Marvel , don't rely on MCU
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Movies · owais
I think Thor should challenge Odin.
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Anime & Comics · Carrots123
I think you have a plan what you will be writing for at least 5 or 10 chapters ahead. You should have a plan and follow with it. The way you are writing is wrong. I have encountered many fanfics that were dropped, because first, either they fed up with rewriting chapters or they met the wall.
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Movies · shawn_anderson
There is such fanfic in Spanish. Is it new some kind of remake or it is just translation?