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For now I think it's very interesting and great story, If you keep this up and bring me those delicious chapters, then you can expect my stones mister 🙏

Man this shit was fire, but the last 100 or so chapters, it is completely trash. There is like zero story progression, only adding up more girls. I feel like author became degenerated from all the people messaging him for harem. I dont mind a good harem, but like there is nothing going on. He doesnt do anything, he could go and level up etc... but he is always doing shit.

Maan, its story about the cloud Village, not konoha, so why are they at Konoha for 40 fucking chapters. I dont get this. The start was soo good, but I just dont want to bother Reading this

I meean it doesnt really make any sense, who would pick option to be a side character, when he already had experience with the mcs and know how they are so wicked. He also cant do anything to them, like wtf is this stupid ass story

Sorry but its just unreadable, I guess you just put it into translator and throw it in here. Try to read the 3rd chapter. My eyes nearly fell out, when I tried to comprehend, what theyre trying to say.

You changed the story so much and honestly... its shit. You've tried to do something original, but in narutoverse your fight wouldnt make any sense. I hope you come to light 😩

I just fucking hate the story progress. I mean there are so many troubles for the mc, there is nothing that can go as planned. My guy has been writing like 5 chapters about going to warehouse. Iam so sick of this.