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Susie_Carvalho

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"He just go be outside." The sentence isn't complete. What did you mean to write?

He just go be outside. Stay around the tree to make sure she was safe, but be out and breathing the Thana air and look at the stars. That was all. He just needed to give his body a break, and then he'd come back up and be there for her when she woke up in the morning.

Rise of the Dark Alpha

Rise of the Dark Alpha

Fantasy · AimeeLynn

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"I can _Xar when we're back and I'm fully healed". It feels like theres's a word missing in between. The sentence doesn't flow

"I don't know," Zev said. "I need to heal before I face Xar, but I also don't want to fight any more of the if it isn't necessary. I don't want to give them a lot of time to change their minds. I say we move ahead with the ritual—the day after tomorrow. Once that's done and we've had our solitude, I can Xar when we're back and I'll be fully healed." His ribs screamed every time he moved, but he knew within two days that would be an ache, and two days after that he'd be good as new.

Rise of the Dark Alpha

Rise of the Dark Alpha

Fantasy · AimeeLynn

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