"He just go be outside." The sentence isn't complete. What did you mean to write?
He just go be outside. Stay around the tree to make sure she was safe, but be out and breathing the Thana air and look at the stars. That was all. He just needed to give his body a break, and then he'd come back up and be there for her when she woke up in the morning.
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
"I can _Xar when we're back and I'm fully healed". It feels like theres's a word missing in between. The sentence doesn't flow
"I don't know," Zev said. "I need to heal before I face Xar, but I also don't want to fight any more of the if it isn't necessary. I don't want to give them a lot of time to change their minds. I say we move ahead with the ritual—the day after tomorrow. Once that's done and we've had our solitude, I can Xar when we're back and I'll be fully healed." His ribs screamed every time he moved, but he knew within two days that would be an ache, and two days after that he'd be good as new.
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
Poor girl! She's in WAY over her head! I'd have gotten nervous and messed up too! 😆🤪
ch 67 Shenanigans
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
I LOVED the extra! I have a feeling there's a lot more story here. I really hope you continue it!
ch 262 [Bonus chapter] NEXT GEN: Mated
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
I disagree about El feeling like she didn't take full responsibility. I also didn't like that they left the giant elephant in the room and didn't address him going behind her back and putting both himself and the kingdom at risk. It may have been well intentioned, but was very poorly thought out. I know that despite being a little prudish with nudity that El is very sexual and I also realize that they agreed to never let outside circumstances get in the way of the relationship. But still, I wouldn't be able to be angry and intimate at the same time. I would have to get things off my chest first, but again... that's me.
ch 230 What Forever Means – Part 2*
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
Amora was the mother figure for Elia, and then Elia stepped into that role for everyone. Suhle is also a gentle soul who has emerged into her strength through maturity. I love that she's stepping into the role of mother figure for Harth, and maybe everyone else too
ch 74 A Friend Among Wolves
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
I agree! 💯
ch 74 A Friend Among Wolves
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
Cool! I didn't realize the Chimera had a prequel. I'll check it out!
ch 64 Always, Together or Apart
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
I'm glad you're doing the phonetic name pronunciations. Though it would have been helpful to know in the other books. The whole time I've been thinking Rika's name was pronounced RYE-Kah. Lol Just curious was Gahry pronounced GAH-REE?
ch 15 War Chief
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
Hahaha! I was about to say...I think it's becoming your signature thing. 😆
ch 12 Faster than Sight
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
I've been trying to open 629 for the past 3 days and it won't open.
ch 628 A Conversation with Reth - Part 1
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
Just wondering... it's not unlocking anymore daily chapters after this one. That hasn't happened before. Just wondering why that's happening???
ch 628 A Conversation with Reth - Part 1
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
Yaaaaay! Kalle and Gahrye are back! 😃
ch 487 Dead Air
Fantasy · AimeeLynn
Zeb gave me Reth vibes with that speech. He was great at making speeches
ch 320 Tomorrow We Fight
Rise of the Dark Alpha
Fantasy · AimeeLynn