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I'm so distraught with this development! This girl, Jiang Xiyue, tried to manipulate (drugged the MC) and kill the MC, now the guy slept with her? She only wants to use him to become empress. The MC is enamored by her good looks and fragrance. Very disappointing. Who knew the MC was a simp who doesnt care if the girl tried to use him as long as she is "sexy". TRASH!

10% of whatever he can harvest, not the whole! Its a far less appealing deal, a 90% tax on anything he can get his hands on. And seeing how they dont even know how to mine it, ves is left with pitiful amounts.

Huh?

Geopolitics is the driving force, power is a prerequisite to play.

Well, to be fair they could just "tip off" an ace pilot with a new custom mech to shut Ves down.

I love chapters like these! Ves in his element with designing.

Wasn't Ves talking big a few chapters ago about how his pride as a designer forces him to do this duel and how he should act, but yet he interferes with a duel and at a large win gap? To what end?

I'm trying to think why MC would aggressively humiliate the Xianxia clan without knowing the circumstances of their wedding proposal. It's just self-centered of him. The only thing I can guess is the "Rushuang has a few friends" and the bad relationship between the empress and emperor Xiao. Or he just wants to claim Rushuang for his own, which I can respect. Anyway, we need a reason ASAP.

Is the pacing just off for everyone? MC is still in the second tier of power out of how many? 8? More? And the book has 1500 chapters. We're closing in on 300 chapters. Is the author going to speed blitz his growth in the last 200 chapters?

So far, Zhao Feng has displayed no interest in women so it's highly probable he'll continue this way. This is a red herring. But if it isn't, its way too forced. Besides, she belongs to a small backwater country that Zhao Feng will rapidly outgrow in probably 125 chapters.

I need to know, are we gonna start getting characters with western names? Thats one of my biggest turn offs. Imagine a Mexican fantasy setting with names like Xiao Wang and Tiangou thrown in.

Who cares. At this point I've read dozens of this types, let the MC tell the world. We'll get something different.

This writing plays out so well. Like a movie scene. That fight though!

This is the best chapter of a light novel I've ever read. Wonderful! You managed to get me to like Aleyria only 19 chapters in. I will not support you on every chapter you write. Keep up the quality work! You won yourself a fan.

Aina, my Aina, so beautiful that I spent everyday for five years confessing my love! Sure, in any normal society it would have been deemed harassment, but my love knows no bounds. I can't think or sleep thinking about you! Jade like skin, slim waist. Please just look at me ounce, my identity is all about liking you! Please say hi to me. please, I need you to live!!!

How do I say this in the upmost respectful way? Can we have the MC not mention how hot a woman is for one chapter? Possible? Book was fire when it was the two gnomes and the old man, but now its "OMG she is so hot!" even during a serious situation. That breaks the tension, makes the MC look weak, and annoys. Please don't take this comment personally. I'm really rooting for you.