everyone in the palace thought you were going to die soon*
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LGBT+ · VanillaLatte
It's not bad so far, but the problem is that you have too many tense changes, y'know. You go from describing things to it is then to it was. Try to keep it consistent in one paragraph. If that doesn't make sense, I'll explain further!
ch 0 1 Awakened
LGBT+ · VanillaLatte
Prince Alien!!
"C-Crown Prince! Crown Prince Ailen has awakened!"
LGBT+ · VanillaLatte
ooh migraine
When a migraine struck, he could barely let out any sound from his parched throat. Helpless in his cage of pain, the boy with hair purest and whiter than snow squirmed under the covers—hoping he could escape from this pain that increased every time he breathed. Another pain throbbed so violently around his skull the boy wondered if there's a knife that cracked his head open.
LGBT+ · VanillaLatte
huh
Weird but the system couldn't help answering, [A blush on the system has been aroused.]
Fantasy · MisterE05
oh yeah! There's a Wolf on the cover too! I thought it was a big dog.
Next time you abuse birds, you shall perish into the deep waters.
ch 0 1 Given Or Not
Urban · AuHNG
Wait, what is a mate? Is that someone you eat?
ch 0 8 Chapter 7
LGBT+ · Jamie
He deserves a cage!!! or maybe a bird. Or I dunno.
ch 0 7 Chapter 6
LGBT+ · Jamie
cool
"Niveus Bond," Ailen breathed out, frowning. "My only hope,"
Rare Bird [BL]
LGBT+ · VanillaLatte