Webnovel Author: val_the_mysterious - Novel Collection

Love this! The imagery, the way your heart is racing along with her. There is depth to the characters, a life to them that the author has managed to capture. The world-building is on great and easy to follow. Writing is good and easily draws in the reader. I’ve had this one sitting in my library for a while and I’m glad I started reading it.

It's still early in the story, but I'm already in love. Two chapters in and the world-building have been shown at a nice, easy to follow, flow. The first chapter did a good job of capturing Oda the human and the pressures he was dealing with. It will be interesting to see how Oda the yokai develops. Love the Japanese myths in the story, I'm always a sucker for myths. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read what comes next in his journey.

I'm five chapters in and am enjoying the story so far. I wouldn't mind a little more information on what the team is/does up to this point we only have the team name to go by and that just brings the movies, by the same name, to mind. There are some gaps in world-building. The best by far is the first chapter and the funeral, beautiful imagery. Characters are interesting and slowly coming together. The interactions with the team members really bring out each individual. The writing could use an edit, some spots are rougher than other's, but the author made it clear that English isn't their first language. Because of this, I say that you're doing a great job with the writing. Keep up the good work.

Interesting story concept. The world-building is good and introduced at a nice pace. The MC is well thought out and easy to follow. The early chapters really draw you into her life before things went bad and pull you down with her. Really enjoying the world-building and the unique take on classic monsters. Writing improves as you go, which is a sign of a good writer. You should always keep improving. Love the story, keep up the good work.

Excellent world building. The characters are well developed and really draw you in. Kaze is such a relatable character. I’m not usually a fan of first person because its a hard voice to write in, in my opinion, but the author nailed it. It’s not awkward or forced but flows well. Writing quality is great. Overall, excellent story. Keep up the good work!

Love the story concept . Not a lot of world building outside of the system as far in as I read. The system is pretty sassy and I like that. Main character has a one track mind and the dialogue between him and the system is hilarious . Good story so far, keep up the good work.