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Bro said "ha father diff."

Maybe hire Claire?? Wasn't she like very good at her job? Wait what even was her job?

I think you meant shurikenjutsu? Cause it said he knew ninjutsu too but then he threw kunais.

It's not as much as repeating, more of the wonky-ness of the AI and the author not editing it out, kinda off putting actually, I have no problem with AI as a crutch for writing but atleast give the effort to smoothen it out in the editing phase.

Maan just get a dna test and say surprise I'm your sensei's kid or something. 😂

Yikesss, danzo really gonn be the winner of the Darwin awards this time huh? Hahahahah

But it literally doesn't say that on the tasj description, all that's written is defeat a kage level shinobi, he did it, imo this feels like a contrived way of introducing tension and drama, cuz they're gonna question him, gonna needle him for answers and stuff, and he'll prolly tell an obvious lie or a lame excuse of not feeling worthy of it cuz of -insert reason- but it wont matter cus it's literally an order for promotion in a ninja village. But yeah that's my take on it, I'll have to wait to see what the author cooks up.

So putting the jinjuriki in a coma didn't count as defeating a kage level ninja?

"Unbeknownst to him, he noticed several men following him..." How does he notice them if it's unbeknownst to him?????

What I think people don't like too, and me personally is that you didn't just do this right from the start, you could've made it like this from the beginning so that we don't jave to read about the god nerfing him, that way it would feel more organic, you say it's a loophole the last chapter but it feels more like a nerf.

So wait, he has reactive evolution, but he can't evolve so that he can use chakra? Why?

I can't really say anything but it really feels like it's all just show and no tell, like galladon did this, then he did this, his father talked to him about this, and that, but they don't really have any dialogue with eachother, feels more like it's just a diary than a story.

Maybe try implementing CloudFlares defense too? They use lava lamps as sources for randomized codes for their antivirus software.

I get it thanks, just would've been smoother imo if the nurses asked him where he got that many weapons or something, just little details u know?

Bro it took 30 chaps for him to get out, I'm not saying it's bad, but it's just the chapters could be longer or be progressed faster??? I feel like we just wasted time but he did get new abilities and equipment, just wondering where all his minions is.