Oh my god, where should I start?!. This is my second time trying to write a review after some technical problems I ran into. I’ll try to keep my thoughts as unbiased as possible even though the author is a friend of mine. Now to the Novel. The story is fresh, even though it has borrowed thoughts from other novels there is a very satisfying blend of the author’s own personality and style of writing. I’ll try to keep everything spoiler free so I’m somewhat restricted in what I can say but I want to say this. I really liked what he did with the RPG side if this novel and it definitely gives it a refreshing aura. If you don’t like RPGs don’t worry cause there is an equal side of the story that has nothin to do with rpgs but I’ll leave to find out yourselves😉. As regarding the characters, they are not plentiful but they are well written and portrayed specifically talking about the protagonist. Expect many twists and hang tight cause it’s going to be an crazy ride! One thing that I didn’t like as much as anything else is that I would prefer a bit more variety character wise but there only so much you can do as your first time trying to write a novel so props for that. Before closing this one out I would like to provoke everyone to give this one a try cause it’s truly fresh and aspired by the author’s own personality and I guarantee that it’s very strong first try at writing with vivid battles and images that come alive as you read so stop reading any more reviews and give this one a try!!!
Fantasy · DogPerson
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Webnovel 
Oh my god, where should I start?!. This is my second time trying to write a review after some technical problems I ran into. I’ll try to keep my thoughts as unbiased as possible even though the author is a friend of mine. Now to the Novel. The story is fresh, even though it has borrowed thoughts from other novels there is a very satisfying blend of the author’s own personality and style of writing. I’ll try to keep everything spoiler free so I’m somewhat restricted in what I can say but I want to say this. I really liked what he did with the RPG side if this novel and it definitely gives it a refreshing aura. If you don’t like RPGs don’t worry cause there is an equal side of the story that has nothin to do with rpgs but I’ll leave to find out yourselves😉. As regarding the characters, they are not plentiful but they are well written and portrayed specifically talking about the protagonist. Expect many twists and hang tight cause it’s going to be an crazy ride! One thing that I didn’t like as much as anything else is that I would prefer a bit more variety character wise but there only so much you can do as your first time trying to write a novel so props for that. Before closing this one out I would like to provoke everyone to give this one a try cause it’s truly fresh and aspired by the author’s own personality and I guarantee that it’s very strong first try at writing with vivid battles and images that come alive as you read so stop reading any more reviews and give this one a try!!!
Break the World
Fantasy · DogPerson