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i only read the first 5 chapters so my review may not be too accurate for future development. Overall, i think this novel is good with the battle phase, there is explanation so you won't feel lost and mc from weak to strong. Though, a criticism i have is the way the explanations are given. I don't know how to explain it in detail but its like the info is given too straightforwardly and it would be better to be more subtle. And the theme looks a bit too similar to the novel's extra with the mc using a gun though maybe the story will be completely different later. I hope that the fact that there are 'higher-existences' and 'transcendents' will later play a role in the story. i think it will be a good read for newcomers.

Guess i got too emotional sorry man

wowowow wait a minute i won't let you slander me like that. Hats off. Let me tell you, your rebuttal as the why things happens was the most simple minded, one dimensional thing i ever saw. I always wondered why wuxia authors were like that and now i see the problem is their lack of creativity and insecurity. You say no one would dare slander the princess because her mother is the strongest. The common people, the other powerhouse scared of one person like that. They can't stop word of mouth. And you say the queen is the strongest but could not help his child's fiance who she LOVES, get revenge on the attacker. The princess is written to always have been in loved and her mother knew it but the princess just broke the engagement off like that when he was crippled. Now what you gonna say she did not want to marry a cripple. But no, if there were real reasons for anything you would have put it in the novel before. You just creating some trash excuse on the fly because you were called out for your lazy writing that doesn't make any sense. And what about that stupid body power stuff you've been rambling about. The context of power in wuxia is literally MC op, takes immortal scriptures, build best foundation, gathers energy and ascend. Don't make a deal that you're some shakespeare of martial writing. And you insecure as hell, you dissected my first comments, went out of your way to screenshot shitload of the story. I'm just imagining your sorry ass just writing for the idiots new that come read when they don't know how to differentiate trash from good. And you getting mad for the first bad comment on your story. Cuz i'm literally the first comment with less than 4.5 stars. You've been deleting the bad ones i bet trash writer

You know what yes i didn't read it properly because it was just a casual read and i was able to make up what was happening because i read that much wuxia manga and novel. If you don't want to take my critisicm, then just ignore it. There are always people who will enjoy your books but writing can always be improved and constructive criticism will definitely help you. You want more people to read and enjoy your books in the future right ? Bye now

i spent 12 hours reading, 48 chapters out of 314. I think that i should get the general idea of this novel. I read a substantial amount more to give it more chance to see if i could invest myself in but unfortunately no

in realism, its dangerous mostly. Royalty needs to have a type of decorum. Rumors are bound to spread about the princess going alone to her former fiance's house. If pushing it a bit further, there should be mannerism between powerful households like messaging the other that they will come to their mansion for a visit. Furthermore, now that i think about it how did she waltz into the main residential area of the Xie family?? Shouldn't there be guards or something. Walls.

As for the matter of the princess being locked up, i phrased it wrongly. Because she said she would be in her room but was able to leave the palace and travel from her place to MC's place. So escape=leave the palace. Because previously it was show she travels using a carriage and it does not make sense she travelled the distance at foot and arrived/ returned while the queen did not realise she was gone.

Author, imma be real, in no way am i trying to hate on this novel. What i've written are my opinions on way you write itself instead of the plot, so that you can use them when making other novels. 1. As you said, the MC was able to master many types of arts, he was the strongest (means already has peak experience), mastered alchemy..etc. Using this broad spectrum the ways he become stronger are countless. Moreover, since the new world and previous world are 99% similar, he may as well create all sorts of pills to become stronger. He should also have many immortal grade stuff since he is 'close friend' with the Queen of demons, i will assume his status was VERY strong. 2. The fact that Alice can cause females to become conscious of him whenever is lacking. Having read several smut novels, i found the ones where the MC appealed to the women better. Because when there is no big development in the relationships it is too easy. For example, you could have made the MC start dating the cousin and then, to keep an eye on them, the aunt is subject to seeing them doing 'stuff' together. This makes her conscious of MC while simultaneously having inner turmoil because of her late husband. 3. As the queen of a nation, especially a martial arts world where the strong reigns and many greedy opportunistics live in, you could expect other families lying in wait to take the chance to harm the queen and take her place. For a potential plot (i'll take it that she has only her daughter as child since she was only introduced) : you could have written that there are conflicts among the powerhouses who wants to pressure the queen to marry her daughter and take more power. That's why she was forced to break the engagement to avoid xie tian from being harmed especially after he became crippled. That would give empathy for her and us readers wishing for them to resolve the misunderstanding and get together. 4. As for the 'don't push it author' i wrote skulls at the end cuz i genuinely thought it was funny, i expected he had this system for whatever reason like always but the fact he created it was funny. Though still unrealistic. I just want a but of realism in fantasy novels. Especially since all chinese novels look the same with face-slapping and small relationship development. That's why i leave reviews, just wish for authors to create some gems later. When i first started reading i also liked these wuxia mangas/novels but now the stories always feel the same. For old readers we always want something unique like the author's pov where you can't expect what will happen or omniscient POV or Shadow slave..etc. Anyway i'm not saying that this novel is unreadable or anything, its up to par with other wuxia novels. Trust me i read some trash. Just you could always improve the story telling.

48 chapters in, honest review This novel is as you would expect from a chinese eroge novel. The plot is still brewing in the background, mainly his supposed dead wife is already in the new world i think. To be honest, its just like dual cultivation but a bit worse. There isn't a clear goal for the MC. He did say become the strongest but this is a bit meh. To achieve this we can just expect plot reinforcement everytime. Things i don't like are: 1. Even though he's supposed to be strongest, he didn't dish out his immortal grades scriptures to have best foundation and body. 2. The females are really shallow. MC kisses his female family members and they are not repulsed but 'lose the strength to push him'?? Then they start to like him. There is no appealing or seducing them. This is especially unrealistic for the aunt who did not like him before and the aunt who had 2 kids and did not like incest. But one kiss subdued them. 3.The world powers are not really explained. There's already 4 main families written but no explanation to who is stronger. We also have that country's queen wandering to some pond with only one guard 2 times and the princess can also escape the palace and go right to MC family house without the queen knowing. Not very realistic. If you want some smut to pass time, then read it. It has many harem people..etc

241 chapters in, Honest review. Out of about 20+ eroge harem novels i read, this one is in my top 3. There isn't much battle action for the first 200 chapts, its more of relationship development among the harem members. The characters are not one dimensional they have their development. The story is not cringe, no constant side characters jealous/envy and face slapping. However, there is indeed a background plot brewing behind the scenes and its gonna be big. Apparently MC is the child of destiny or something. Something i personally like is we now have the academy arc where '3summoned heroes' are attending (1 male,2 females). Its like the side character perspective in an anime with the dense harem protagonist. I swear the plot writing is giving the exact vibes. But MC is gonna win in the end. Maybe that hero dude would double cross and become a villain because the other summoned heroes(his classmate/childhood friend) got stolen. For the cons, i'd say the lack of action. Some may not like this style. For a good amount of chapters, the MC is a growing kid and is sheltered. Mostly spending his days learning magic with his adopted mother who's the strongest mage. Another thing you might not like is that the mother became intimate while MC was still a child (though that was what MC was trying to do)

19 chapters in, Honest review. Fisrt, if you're reading for some smut instead of wanting a good plot then read it. Literally, MC is op and there isn't overly cringy face slapping like in chinese novels. however things i don't like are: 1. The introduction to the MC. The story starts saying he has been abused/oppressed since 7 until 20+ years old. Based on writing, he was a coward first. When he dies and relives with the system, he gets immortal power for 1 hour to take revenge. On this revenge, he was literally said to have become crazy. Then when he finishes, he uses his system ability to make himself a lost son of some wealthy family. And now, his actions and mindset are neither crazy nor cowardly. Like this whole backstory was for nothing and it added nothing to as a character. He acts like a normal human being. 2. His system is broken. For each person he kills he gets 1 point. The points can be used to warp reality to a degree, manipulate minds, give MC master martial arts knowledge and any Master level knowledge like drivig..etc for less than 5 points cause earth knowledge is cheap apparently. MC from the start does not need to put any effort to gain power, can avoid all responsibilities and also helps seduce all women. On the first and second day of him having the system, his stats went from average overall 8 to 80. Mind you 100 stats is the peak of humans on earth. 3. Story development. Already said that his initial situation does not affect the plot at all. Later he fakes DNA test (for 1 point) and becomes the heir of this rich family. There has been no family bonding time and the whole main family took and love him as their own blood relative in 1 day. He also showed them his power on this first day and no one felt threathened or scared. 4. Characters. So far i can say the sisters are definitely one dimensional characters. They will love MC just because writer said so. Also since MC can use the system to make women conscious of him, he does not have to appeal to them whatsoever. 5. Personally i do not like that theme of there is superpowers on earth which are all hidden. Not realistic at all this hiden side can co-exist with normal humans witbout them even knowing. There are still many other bad writing i did not say because now its just a rant. Like how quickly things go. 24+ hours-> MC dies, relives takes revenge > find new family > Fight cousin, teach sisters martial art and massaging them > Goes on car ride with sister, gets attacked, save sisters > show family he is a superhuman, kills other family which attacked them > Goes to school. Inbetween, made aunt counscious of him. Made school goddess conscious of him. Sisters loves him as a brother.

alright 336 chapters in and many peeking ahead, honest review. First, the main focus of this novel is stealing girls (netori). No, the girls are not some shallow one-dimensional character. The writing makes it that these girls come to love the mc better. They have personality and minds on their own to help MC. A good point i see is the fact that each girl, even though there are many, is not forgotten into the background after getting 'stolen'. There are chapters for each overtime. Due to that, the story is very long, like 500 chapters= 1 month of school. Story shows the day by day routine of MC. Don't worry, its not your chinese story that are extended for nothing. We get to see the MC monologue, interactions with the female leads. The only plot here is how MC steals girls and try to work to be able to stay with all of them in the future. MC also has gradual mindset development over the story. He is not cringe. He has a very fit body but is not some great fighter. He is not some smart genius either. Just a typical guy maybe. Anyway if you like vanilla romance, this novel may not be for you but you can try it for a change of taste.

350 chapters in, honest review. If you're into smut, you're gonna love the vast range of female leads in there. If you're also into plot, then there is some good one which really harmonizes with the smut. The story is made such that there is a reason for the smut to happen and there is always a build-up (some more than others) prior to the smut. For the main female leads (>A+ diffuculty) MC needs to seduce, there is always some sort of planning to make sure MC reaches his goal. But don't expect real world logic, this is a novel. The fact that MC could bamboozel all the countries/races' princesses and other very important females is not realistic. All in all, this is one of the top smut novels because most characters got a personality on their own and you can read, feel the scheming personality of the MC into play. He plays dirty. This novel is very good

20 chapters in, honest review Facts first: MC is op right from the start, is staying low-key, is very smart. Good points: The writing is not cringe (very little) He was training for 5 years to become from C to B for his stats.(character building) His sister seems to find something odd with zero since his sickness and mc took his place. Potential good development plot. Bad points: I don't really like the 'Status system' in the magical world. MC parents straight up just ask him his stats and did not use tools to ascertain his potential. Then there's the timeskip from his isekai date to 5 years later. It skipped on so much family interaction that could have happened (specially since MC said he became emotionally attached to them like real family) Potential writing on MC coping with the isekai skipped. For all these iskais, i can't help but think these MCs liked the isekai world better and wanted it. Anothet bad plot was the story building to the tournament arc which was basically none. The tournament was just dumped in there and the info that the kingdom's princess would come is also dumped in. Furthermore, this tournament is called 'the best warrior of the decade' but it is conducted in some small city and MCs parents said that Anya was the strongest in the city with average E rank stats. Not much sense. This arc can only be called lazy. For all the supposed grandeur, MC was able to sign in his own sister as a contestant without her knowledge (though he did tell his sister he had a plan). This just shows that the security for the tournament very very low. Again not much sense. Then another thing dumped in there is MC suddenly becomes a smart schemer who sees everyone as a 'piece'. Just like that, no development prior. Mind you he was a normal average guy in his previous life Lastly, the fact that he was able to set an explosive (dunno how he could even know how) under the princess platform is just idiotic. Royalty of a kingdom and any B rank magician can just slide in and harm her life. Where is the security, royal knights. Moreover, after she was saved by Anya (for the plan) ,she comes to MC mansion on the same day! So no going into hiding after an assassination attempt. Following logic, there should be an investigation to find to attackers. But she just travel across the city to MC house wih only 4 guards. No logic. I don't know if the plot building gets better and im not gonna stick around to find out. Just my opinion.

Alright 11 chapters in, 3 hours. This novel is your typical chinese novel. First thing first, NO ONE ,even his 'friend who sticks by him' finds something wrong with his character. Second, MC finds one of his comrades whos gonna go into the tower and gain permanent trauma. His efforts to prevent that is ONLY warning her. Mind you he is a stranger to her. And he has the galls to say 'i tried nothing i can do if she does go'. Bro did NOT put in any effort. But as typical chinese novel, she was saved by the advice and became infatuated with him.( they met and spoke only one time after regression) thirdly MC says he does not want to gather attention but the very next thing he does is sell information to his former 'guild'. Some very important info worth 1 million points apparently. He gives his credit cart info for the transaction and a guild representative comes to his school. His friend (side character) is literally lick boot, has seemingly infinite trust and devotion towards MC for no given reason. Their friendship looks more like Alpha-Beta. All other characters do not like like normal human beings. Reactions are : Extreme jealosy, very exaggerated reactions, understimating MC Also the supposed Greatest tower climber (MC) was apparently a weak poor student with bad grades at his school. No background whatsoever. The number of 'face-slapping' in these 11 chapters was at least 5 times. Overall its your typical Wuxia op underestimated MC with other charcters: 1.devoted or infatuated to him 2.understimating him, jealous Not my taste

bruh why the hell did i understand ptsd when you said stds. but yeah thats all i needed to know this novel gonna be a bang

Well you can't say those other characters don't have anything to do with the story because at the start, its clearly stated he NEEDS to prevent any female leads to be with the game's protagonist or the god who sent him would send his soul to eternal suffering. Plus he sent his mother a letter to explain why he was going away.