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Poor grammar and frequent pronoun mismatch. Story is compelling but i can't continue with this grammar FILLFILLFILLFILLFILL FILLF IFILLF ILF

Great Novel; start off rough but gets better really fast. Plot progression is really stable not too fast and not too slow. MC doesn't go OP real quick and character design is great

Love the story so far. Pacing is really good not too fast or too slow. The MC progression in strength is also really good as well since it doesn't make her OP immediately but makes her put in some effort as well. The only real issue that I have is the MC temperament directly after she got dropped here as she went from his poor overworked to death girl to some girl who is cocky and overconfident with the young master syndrome