Moments 9
Thank you for the chapter. You should add the tag "Harry Potter" to make the story easier to find.
ch 0 3 The vaults and Ritual.
Reborn in Harry Potter as a Le Fay
Book&Literature · Uchiha_Lover21
I agree, the dialogues need to be clarified, awaiting the next chapters.
ch 0 1 Birth.(RW)
Reborn in Harry Potter as a Le Fay
Book&Literature · Uchiha_Lover21
Is it abandoned ?
ch 28 Comming Soon
TDG:DIVINE KINGDOM (OLD VERSION)
Book&Literature · BlackKingJade
Interesting, can't wait to read more, it will be regular publications?
ch 0 1 Reincarnation
Wizarding World: Malakai Malfoy
Movies · FalloutNerd
I agree, instead of nerf the power of the mc it might be interesting to to focus it on research and development of the magical world with the seals from Naruto. We notice that there are 2 "camps" among the Malfoy, he might want to help Narcissa by taking more financial independence and it would allow him to use his "celebrity". In addition, Narcissa would make a good figurehead for his businesses and it would distance her from the Death Eater side.
ch 0 4 Year 5: 1st Magitsu
With Naruto Knowledge System in Harry Potter World
Movies · The_Lost_God
Can we still expect a continuation or is it abandoned ?
ch 20 Not dropped
An Elementalist at Hogwarts
Book&Literature · The_Grindelwald
It would be nice to have a few more chapters published to give us an idea of the direction the story is going to take and encourage us to follow it. Maybe tell us if he is going to try to take over the Prince family, if he is going to create products ect.. It would be necessary to know more about what he intends to do, his capacities and his objectives, apart from being in his own camp and not modifying the cannon too much. Waiting for the next chapters.
I wrote a fucking 2110 words. Man how cool is that. It was basically gonna be half of it but then it would have been completely the info dump, with no progress. I personally hate chapters that are info dump, so I decided to post the whole lot. I will post one more chapter this week... probably. Depends on whether I have a motivation which depends highly on comments and reviews. hahahahaha... Just kidding. Honestly I started this story on a whim, but now I like it. I have the ending, but I am writing it on the way and it feels better this way as I am free to proceed with the story. I really hope you comment on the work now as it not only motivates me, it also tells me if I am making mistakes. Don't worry I won't change the story for you. But I can improve on certain aspects like writing style, grammar etc.
Stuffed into Snape
Book&Literature · creepycatisawesone
The story can be interesting, especially the direction Itachi will take in this world / his choice of " side ". We must not forget that he massacred his clan to keep the "peace" and avoid civilian victims. However, after seeing the consequences of his actions he probably regretted it, and in view of the One Piece world government system that defends slavery and the random murder of the tenryubito, I don't think his "justice" can go in that direction. If he becomes a pirate it would be like Luffy ect... but I don't see him gathering companions, he was far from being the most sociable in Naruto, it remains nevertheless more or less possible (looking for friendship / or a family like white beard to finally enjoy this life). I don't think that's possible for revolutionaries either, due to the passive murders they cause in rebellion (wars, etc.). Maybe put in place a new organization or something else. It all depends on the motivation he finds in this world, whether he has a family or not, etc... In terms of skills, the sharingan could give him an OP haki of observation, with the rest of his skills and knowing that he knows how to handle a sword (he had one in the anbu and at the time of the massacre of his clan), he will have more than enough power in this world so for the fruit you can have fun on your own. The story clearly has potential, I hope you will at least try to see the direction it will take !
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**trashed**
Anime & Comics · jaspr
One Piece. For the powers we have: - The different haki - Powerful swordsmen - Fruits of the devil There is also the choice of his faction which could be interesting, is he a pirate, a revolutionary, a marine, a Tenryūbito or is he going to create his own side? For the girls you also have plenty to please you. And for Luffy's death it shouldn't be mission impossible either, I love the character but without the fact that he is the protagonist he wouldn't have lasted long in this world.
Protagonist Killer
Anime & Comics · Dereck_Oliveira