Antecedents or synanems
"Ow..." He gasped. He lifted himself onto his butt. He felt his warm blood running down his back and side. He groaned in pain as he quickly took off his black leather jacket and tossed it. He quickly ripped his white shirt off and threw it off to the side.
Urban · Reiverus
Please start giving antecedents to the numerous pronouns.
"Ow..." He gasped. He lifted himself onto his butt. He felt his warm blood running down his back and side. He groaned in pain as he quickly took off his black leather jacket and tossed it. He quickly ripped his white shirt off and threw it off to the side.
Urban · Reiverus
Oops .. synonym
"Ow..." He gasped. He lifted himself onto his butt. He felt his warm blood running down his back and side. He groaned in pain as he quickly took off his black leather jacket and tossed it. He quickly ripped his white shirt off and threw it off to the side.
Biohuman
Urban · Reiverus