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From the beginning up until the latest chapters, I saw that the chapters were well-described and I could imagine the scenes in my head. You could use more distinct character development if you wish to make the story much more interesting. Keep up the good work!
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From the beginning up until the latest chapters, I saw that the chapters were well-described and I could imagine the scenes in my head. You could use more distinct character development if you wish to make the story much more interesting. Keep up the good work!
You're Just My Dream
Teen · _ARS