nicely done, your sure getting better, I liked how well you described the holy beast not to mention kiri is starting to be my favorite due to her personality trait kicking in
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Nicely done start, if only you show some designs and characters of how they really look, but other then that, keep up the good work, ill support as much as possible
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nicely done, your sure getting better, I liked how well you described the holy beast not to mention kiri is starting to be my favorite due to her personality trait kicking in
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Fantasy · VentusGX20