Really good work man, you can easily tell you have made progress in your storytelling. Overall the novel so far is a really nice read and really recommend it. Sure the first 4 chapters or so arent the best out there but once those are done it gets quite interesting. So here's hoping for the next chapter!
Fantasy · Yuri_1539
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Really good work man, you can easily tell you have made progress in your storytelling. Overall the novel so far is a really nice read and really recommend it. Sure the first 4 chapters or so arent the best out there but once those are done it gets quite interesting. So here's hoping for the next chapter!
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Fantasy · Yuri_1539