Hey there, nicely done in explaining why Quinn didn#t involve his Grandfahter. And as such i have to take back my critique from the last chapter. And yet still it#s unfortunate that quinn let Umbridge torture many children but only truly went ahead with his plan after he himself was targeted.
ch 241 Bones, DMLE, Difference
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
If your Umbritch would be more like the book Umbritch, i am of the opinion that she wouldn't go after Quinn. After all one word from him to his Gramps and his Gramps would destroy Umbritch/Fudge/Ministry. After all you portrayed the West familiy as one of the most important Families in the world. So this open hostility from Umbritch towards Quinn is nonsensical and counterproductive to get good connections to Quinn#s gramps.
ch 239 Aid In Distress
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
If something happend to Lady Dustin through the Ironborn, then this is just a way to create more drama, because they knew of the Ironborn Rebellion long before it happend. Otherwise this story would become too inconsistent with how intelligent the Dustins where portrayed this far (with the exception of how Brie died; that was pure stupidity of Barbrey)
ch 86 I will bath in their blood
TV · EnderPL
Are you the same Author as cloud9stories on fanfiction.net? If not then shame on you for stealing his/her work. If you are indeed the same author i will adjust my rating.
Naruto : Domination
Anime & Comics · sybife